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Reminded of You

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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 03-26-2002 10:03 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Cpat Hair


It has been years
And last night I dreamed of you.

Not the you I knew then,
When we were young
Foolishly hiding away each chance
That was or was not there
To explore the reality of intimacy
In our own selfish ways
While we ran from the truths
That we were just young
Just wanting to be whole

No, not that you
But an older one
Wiser,
for all you did was hug me
Ask me how Id been
Without the hesitant pause
Of do I dare?
And smiled

Perhaps it means
I have let that childhood love go
Knowing we have both grown older
Have lived separate lives

Yet
I still remember the flush of your cheek
And short breathed sighs

The hug was enough
To let me know I still cared
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1 posted 03-26-2002 10:09 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

"I have let that childhood love go
Knowing we have both grown older

Yet

...I still remember the flush of your cheek
And short breathed sighs"

Perfect!  A memory that everyone should retain of some One special....

Duncan
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2 posted 03-26-2002 10:16 AM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

I've come to this place, after passion and intensity...sometimes a hug, does speak well of who we have become.  It's a little too early for me to really delve into this one, I will save it for later.  There is much about it that touched me.
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3 posted 03-26-2002 10:29 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Ron

"The hug was enough
To let me know I still cared"

I love the way you turned this hug around at the end.  Much enjoyed!
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4 posted 03-26-2002 10:30 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

I know this
you've put into words  what I couldn't.
and from a female point of view, it feels the same when the dream is of a man...
I'm keeping this
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5 posted 03-26-2002 11:32 PM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(sigh) This is sooooooo beautifully sensitive, sweet friend, I too always feel just hugging a close friend always comforts me so very much and makes me feel there is one close friend that will always be close to my heart! (big hugggsssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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6 posted 11-25-2005 12:46 PM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

Someone asked about you...

and it made me miss you.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

 
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