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0 posted 2002-03-26 10:00 AM


Soddy Thought 1876

Our days wend busier when dust blows
half our time
encompasses hands before eyes
keeping grit out,
and woe that
wifely sort, who dusts and dusts the dust
that grins under her feet, and in her
mouth....

quick, quick, come with me to the water's fall
and in a moment's drench
we shall be
reborn

© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-26 10:08 AM


would be a chill drench this day..

nicely done my friend..captures the elemental struggle as well as the internal that comes from surviving.


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2 posted 2002-03-26 10:26 AM


"and in a moment's drench
we shall be
reborn"


I love that part!
soddy series...none better.

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3 posted 2002-03-26 10:27 AM


Loved the rush!  Nice one Sunshine~
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4 posted 2002-03-26 10:51 AM


Karilea

I think you really must have been there, you know so much.  Love the sensitive look you give us.

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5 posted 2002-03-26 12:08 PM


I am so glad I didn't live then and there. When I hear the stories I wonder at their strength of character and adventurous spirit.

Nan

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6 posted 2002-03-26 11:29 PM




(smiles) I just love the wonderful views of the ages you reflect in your words, sweet friend, I too always feel that sensation of miraculous beauty when I eye a waterfall, it always seems to elp me rejuvenate when I need to relax! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2002-03-26 11:31 PM


quick, quick, come with me to the water's fall
and in a moment's drench
we shall be
reborn"


rebirth, has a symbol of meaning....I like this, and the style too...


Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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8 posted 2002-03-26 11:37 PM


what a vivid look back!!!! I know this dust... comes from a first house made of the earth they will farm... and the sands of time unleashed.

Love, Light and Peace,

Sherry

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

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9 posted 2002-03-27 12:25 PM


Karilea,
Was that an invitation to a bath? LOL Just wondering...love this series.

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10 posted 2002-03-27 10:43 AM


and woe that
wifely sort, who dusts and dusts the dust
that grins under her feet, and in her
mouth....

However much I may love the words... That was NOT one of my ancestors! LOL

This is beautiful, Sunshine... I enjoyed very much. *S*

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11 posted 2002-03-27 11:18 AM


Karilea!  You KNOW how much I love the Soddy Series, and this quick deep thought is yet another one for me to treasure!  I think I lived before, back then...seems so real to me.  Well done my sweet friend!  Hugs!!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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