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HopeS
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0 posted 2002-03-26 07:53 AM


Can Only Do My Best

I cannot give you stars
Nor the moon above
I can give you poems
All versed with my love

I cannot give a fortune
All that money brings
I can share you love
Along with simple things

I can only do my best
Give the helping hand
Be patient and caring
My heart to understand

I can paint with words
Sharing you my view
Across sparkling sea
With love to reach you

I can give the promise
To share in harmony
It’s my heart to you
Sent with my guarantee

Hope©2002


© Copyright 2002 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-03-26 08:00 AM


HopeS,
This is a wonderful write.

HopeS
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2 posted 2002-03-26 08:07 AM


Thanks for your kind reply ,I do appreciate your thoughts
yes like the title says , I can only do my best "
Hope

Duncan
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3 posted 2002-03-26 01:13 PM


It's all anyone can give...and sometimes, it's enough.  Enjoyed the write!

[This message has been edited by Duncan (03-26-2002 01:57 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-03-26 10:38 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may he always give you his ebst too and together may you love unconditionally without restraint and share true happiness forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Alan
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5 posted 2002-03-30 11:19 PM


beautiful Hope
passing shadows
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6 posted 2002-03-31 03:55 AM


and good enough that is!
ShadowRider
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7 posted 2002-03-31 09:47 PM


Very very very (repeat at least 4 more times) nice!

a message
a poem
that brings out
the inner smile

Thanks for that Hope!
theShadowRider

HopeS
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8 posted 2002-03-31 09:50 PM


Thanks all for you caring replies
you all bring  smiles to my eyes
Hope

Magnus
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9 posted 2002-04-01 06:13 PM


And I do believe you would give all that
you say....You seem to be that type of
person..

butterflykiss989
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10 posted 2002-04-01 07:24 PM


Sometimes doing your best is more then enough... sometimes it means the world to someone... very nice i enjoyed it
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