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Take Me...Between the Lines
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Take Me...Between the Lines |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States 
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Take Me…Between the Lines By Larry Chadwick I saw you from afar, I want you It was plain for me to see. I want you You were everything I longed for, I want you All I dreamed you would be. Dare I take the chance, I want you And risk telling you so? I want you Or would you see it in my eyes, I want you Allowing me to assume you know? I’ve tried to make it obvious, I want you For fear of scaring you away. I want you I’ve hinted every way I know, I want you So the words I won’t have to say. I’ll take the chance and wait it out, I want you I’m old fashioned in my heart. I want you If you can’t read between the lines, I want you We were doomed from the start. March 26, 2002 Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very clever! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Excellent Larry ... the want and desire comes through beautifully in this piece. I loved the format and the clever title and unique inserts ... very well done indeed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done... I enjoyed! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Larry C, I go along with Kit on this one. Enjoyed |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Fabulous bringing those thoughts so clear and allowing those inbetween to appear , I enjoyed reading between the lines Hope |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Larry~ Indeed a clever write, you do these well, with much thought....  Lauren~ Greeneyes~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-26-2002 09:10 AM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
passing shadows, Thanks very much. Kit, Well...it all comes together occasionally and it is so much fun. Thank you so much for making me feel at home here. Cpat Hair, Thank you and it was my pleasure. Sy, Times two? Wow thanks kind sir. Hope, I'm so glad and thank you. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lauren, And about those thoughts...thanks. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This is sooooooo emotionally powerful, sweet friend, I hope she does feel how much you want her always for I am sure she wants you just as much for you are a wonderful loving person with so much love to share! (big hugggssssss) This is gorgeously sensitive, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
I really enjoyed this Hunger, hope and Hesitation. Well written... and you must have taken soooo much time with the html for the "between the lines." Love, Light and Peace. Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Noah, Awww that is classified information.  Thanks.Sherry, Thank you so very much. Actually it was a little cut and paste and is now a cheat sheet. Worth the effort and thanks again. |
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