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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 2002-03-25 11:38 PM






Your weeping violins
filling with the spirit
of the soul and bright suns,
voicing the dulcet
presence of love.Enchanting
tones swelling the heart
with their softly, melodic
whisperings.You bowing gentle
stirrings across your strings.
Rhapsodic notes building,
capturing the heart with
~~~their tonal beauty.

Playing passionate love songs
for your lover's eager ears.
A sweet symphony...known only
to the adored one who hears
the love in your exquisite rhapsodies,
~~~in your weeping violins.

© Copyright 2002 Ivy Rose - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-25 11:42 PM


Very fresh and descriptive of love.

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2 posted 2002-03-25 11:47 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooo enchanting, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always orchestrate such love and tenderness! (kiss on cheek) This is a symphony of delight, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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By the Seaside
3 posted 2002-03-26 12:13 PM


Playing passionate love songs
for your lover's eager ears.
A sweet symphony...known only
to the adored one who hears

Love is hitting the high notes and fine tuning them...
and you've done just that!!!
Nicely penned Ivy Rose~


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