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Hip-Hop ... The Rhyme Won't Stop

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Marge Tindal
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Hip-Hop~ The Rhyme Won't Stop
~*Marge Tindal*~

Once upon new Easter Day time
I found a bunny hopping rhyme
Hippity-Hoppity with the beat
Showing kids new poetry treat

He hid words in grass so tall
So they'd never find them all
Then with basket held in hand
Merry kids go search the land

Hunting different on this day
Words when found kid must say
Must use it in a poetic rhyme
Not just once - but two times

Relating it to new Easter Day
Hear what children had to say
E-G-G-S signify new B-I-R-T-H
So He'd preach peace on earth

S-I-N is never done to friend
Turn thy cheek time and again
F-O-R-G-I-V-E we all shall do
As the Lord hath forgiven you

R-I-S-E-N up to Heaven's door
His promise to us forevermore
Now says Easter Bunny sweetly
Eat your chocolate egg neatly


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1 posted 03-25-2002 10:45 PM       View Profile for skyshine   Email skyshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit skyshine's Home Page   View IP for skyshine

This is such a cute Easter poem!

sky
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2 posted 03-25-2002 10:58 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is precious, Marge! I must give this to Nicole, she'll absolutely love it!
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3 posted 03-25-2002 11:02 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

I love this Easter is a happy time for me.
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I have an egg that says Marge on one side and friend on the other.  Hugs!
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5 posted 03-25-2002 11:13 PM       View Profile for Trillium   Email Trillium   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Trillium

Marge:  This is charming and also tells some of the things Easter means.  I'm sure children will love it as well as adults. I'll show it to Ron tomorrow.  Great job.

Betty Lou Hebert

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this is so cute and interesting, yet informative at the same time! I shall be forwarding this to my nieces and nephews!!

~ cottage
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7 posted 03-26-2002 06:29 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Wonderful combination of a cute "symbol" ... with the true message and meaning behind the tradition. Lovely Marge!

Best wishes,
/Kit
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Marge,
I love it,
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I think mayhaps it DOES da-DUM though...
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Thanks dear friends - I say to you
Share it as it is intended you, do
There upon the new Easter Day dawn
Find chocolate eggs upon your lawn

It is a fun,fun day to be a poet !
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Auntie Margie girl this is so very very cute, in your own inimitable way you have given the true Easter message in a way that children can relate to. I like this a whole lot. You are an excellent writer you know. Wonderful writing, and Easter HUG's to you and yours. happy Easter


Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

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at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

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12 posted 03-26-2002 09:59 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I enjoyed this so very much, Marge... wonderful weaving of whimsy and wisdom. *S*
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Now I really feel like Easter, bunnies and all, thanks for sharing Marge. floria

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This is sweet

Nan

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Such a basket filled with friends
Greet of day on gently-blown wind
May you find new word in egg-play
Scrambling a new friendship today

*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Yep,  I think this is a keeper....and the kids...

WILL LOVE IT!!!!
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This is a wonderful easter poem, Marge! I love it.
Marge Tindal
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Sharing the poem with friends and kids
Is about the greatest thing I ever did
Painted a glowing smile upon this face
That nothing under that sun will erase

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Marge Tindal
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-ing the Easter Basket of rhyme~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -             noles1@totcon.com

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