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At Break of Day
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At Break of Day |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Should not the day break at the morn and shower all with light When shafts of white are again born before the break of night. As stars do die upon the birth of day upon the lands The sun ‘gain smiles unto the earth where life is born and stands Into the heavens high the beam shall hurtle into space as cosmic dust does ride the stream of solar dust in race. The countless years have graced the face of man and beast alike bringing warmth and light to each place with each new solar spike. If not the dawn should break anew the cock will sleep till freeze and moon shall fade and bid adieu producing no more cheese. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Enchantingly beautiful, Larry...and I love the little surprise in your last verse about the moon and the cheese!  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank you Myra....uh....I mean Lyra.... glad you liked the little ending...Nice try on saying BARRY....With a B...like in Boy, or butter, or some other word that doesn't start with an L as in Larry..... See....that is part of that senior thing you wrote about.... I knew you weren't 23!!!!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, you twisted this well at the end, I was just about to leave a heavy sigh  and am leaving a  instead! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I enjoyed the images of the light of the moon that shines on a brand new day! How dreadful it would be though if there was no more cheese. Now that concerns me.  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ah Yes...lady of light, our shining sun... I had to put a twist at the end....something a little different for the evening before break of a new day.... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Blues....OK....BRB...I will change the last part and make sure the cheese doesn't go away.... (kidding of course)...thanx. glad you liked it! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwww...behold the power of cheese! LOL! (giggles) This is sooooooo cute, sweet friend, I love that punchline at the end, this is delightful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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