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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-03-25 04:54 PM


Lusting eyes
desire prize

given the gold
softly hold

Treasures revealed
Kisses sealed

sensually soft sighs
passionately enjoy
lusting eyes


© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
Soleil Noir
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1 posted 2002-03-25 05:06 PM



would you take
less than ten
for twenty more?

Martie
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2 posted 2002-03-25 05:12 PM


Magnus

So few to make so much!

Magnus
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3 posted 2002-03-25 05:13 PM


Of course....for twenty more..

Breath on ear
brings chill

fingers trace
lover's trail

Lost in senses
chemistries mix

held in slumber
smiles betray
contentment

Soleil Noir
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4 posted 2002-03-25 05:28 PM


~ Less than ten ~

goosebumps
trickling

spine
edging
taut

words
waterfalling
into
pleasure

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5 posted 2002-03-25 06:07 PM


Magnus darling boy, I hope you have your helmet on wicked grin YOU are going to need it

Watch out watch out
Mushy’s about
She’s waiting just for you
While you are there
She’ll creep to your chair
And bonk she’s bashed you.


You know I love this, NO ONE writes these better absolutely no one. Fabulous utterly utterly fabulous. You knew I’d love it darling boy.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Suetang
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6 posted 2002-03-25 06:09 PM


Hello Barry

This was simply luscious!!

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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7 posted 2002-03-25 08:10 PM


Awesome! You do these so well
Sandra

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8 posted 2002-03-25 08:59 PM


Good stuff Barry!  Nice to see you are keeping the 20 or less up and running while I am awaiting computer repairs.  Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Madame Chipmunk
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9 posted 2002-03-25 09:03 PM


Enjoyed the first and the second one, Barry....Now you have 40 or less!
Both excellent pieces.  

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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10 posted 2002-03-25 09:39 PM


Gorgeous and sensual....you're awesome at 20 or less, great writing!     

*Krista Knutson*

"An eye for an eye only ends up making the whole world blind." -Gandhi

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11 posted 2002-03-25 09:43 PM


Barry~

I adore this, and I love reading the 20 or less....this is simply beautiful...and so sensual...


Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Magnus
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12 posted 2002-03-25 09:57 PM


To all....I do thoroughly enjoy your warmth
and your own enjoyment of these little
pieces of poetry...  So...I give you a
parting 20 or less for the evening...

spell bound eyes
caressing mind
yearning

Tasty deep kisses
sensual blisses
passions burning

Candles flicker
shadows dance
on sighing walls

[This message has been edited by Magnus (03-27-2002 03:25 PM).]

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13 posted 2002-03-26 12:30 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, these are sooooooo sensually gorgeous, sweet friend, these sighs from your heart are bound to melt her heart forever, you are a true romantic! (big hugggsssssss) We all love you so much,s weet friend, these are true gems of poetic art! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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14 posted 2002-03-27 01:35 AM


Oh that look is the best prize of all!!
Love this twenty twenty vision of yours.

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