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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-03-25 03:55 PM



mouth to ear promise
eye to eye pledging of love
my troth in a kiss


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (03-25-2002 04:03 PM).]

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Soleil Noir
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1 posted 2002-03-25 04:19 PM



tender to thine ear
lashes touching lashes kiss
a pledge ever kept

Sven
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2 posted 2002-03-25 04:22 PM


a pledge ever kept
with words, quiet, unspoken
without a language

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2002-03-25 04:32 PM


without a language
butterfly kisses given
my heart lost to you

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Magnus
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4 posted 2002-03-25 05:00 PM


            Silence telling
       of kisses inner dwelling
        Breath of life melding

Nicely done Interloper

[This message has been edited by Magnus (03-25-2002 05:01 PM).]

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5 posted 2002-03-25 05:20 PM


InterLoper~

Stirred deliciously
with promised kiss from your lips
anticipating~

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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6 posted 2002-03-25 07:37 PM


Lips whisper gold vows
Eyes tear up with compassion
Revealing loves trust



(smiles) This is such a beautiful declaration of love to your sweetheart, sweet friend, your gorgeous senryus always make me smile! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Interloper, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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The Shores of Alone
7 posted 2002-03-25 08:01 PM


Love,the magic kiss
makes all else unimportant
I wish I had some

Sorry, I'm just down there in the blues again. I like the way you do these little mini treasures.
Sandra

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8 posted 2002-03-25 08:07 PM


Nice job, 'loper, but you misspelled tooth
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9 posted 2002-03-25 10:00 PM


~sigh~

I love how you do these....
you take one moment and
turn it into a wish of time....lovely!!  


Lauren~


Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-25-2002 10:01 PM).]

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with you
10 posted 2002-03-25 11:07 PM


feather light touching
soft meeting, greeting, then meld
our lips, hearts and souls

RosePetal
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11 posted 2002-03-25 11:41 PM


you know I love this! Kissing can be so sensual! enjoyed my friend
Ivy Rose
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12 posted 2002-03-26 12:08 PM


Interloper...A rare touch of dew upon the lips...this kiss you wrote of. Sensuality at its best in three short lines.  ***Ivy Rose
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
13 posted 2002-03-26 11:21 AM


this be your promise
creation of tomorrow
bestowed by a kiss

VAS
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14 posted 2002-03-26 12:47 PM


Wow! A strong promise in your kiss.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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