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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-03-25 11:35 AM

delectable eyes
eyes reflecting love for me
eyed delectably

Inspired by: Glimmer

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (03-25-2002 04:39 PM).]

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2002-03-25 11:37 AM

Sounds like a tasty gaze, she has.
Sandra

haydenjames
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 164
Antigua & Barbuda

2 posted 2002-03-25 11:40 AM

I love poetry about eyes. So much locked inside um.

My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

3 posted 2002-03-25 11:59 AM

Bob darling boy Oh my stars this is utterly utterly wonderful really lovely writing, YOU have written this sooooooo perfectly, you do these better than anyone I know, absolutely perfect.

YOU are such a wonderful writer

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

4 posted 2002-03-25 12:34 PM

This is delectably great.love it. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

5 posted 2002-03-25 01:08 PM

her eyes sound yummy lol sorry that
sounded dorky...hehe...seriously this
is a beautiful poem! very well written.
take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

6 posted 2002-03-25 02:44 PM

deliciously done, Sir.

I know all about those eyes..I have them myself it seems.

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

7 posted 2002-03-25 04:34 PM

You have a wonderful knack
of picking up a thought
where one would think it
had been left off...

Enjoyed this!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-03-26 12:27 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this gorgeous vision scintillates with loves beauty, sweet friend, may your loves eyes forever reflect romantic poetry to your heart! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Interloper, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

9 posted 2002-03-26 12:36 PM

veryyyyyyyyyyy sweet...
*~coco~*

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

10 posted 2002-03-26 11:27 AM

windows to the soul
mirroring all that it sees
reflects a true heart

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

11 posted 2002-03-26 12:45 PM

delightfully delectable!

the eyes have it!!!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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