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Unexpected Vacation |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Swimming to safe, crossing the moat for once again I missed the boat I clamber past the rocky shore to bask in sun, feel warmth once more. Gardenia fragrance fills the air a place to rest, forget all cares Defrost my heart in rays of gold perhaps all memories aren't old. Trade winds blow gently o'er the sand carry a whisper 'cross the land Someday my love will come to me till then, I wait here by the sea. [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (03-25-2002 11:12 AM).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
im sure he will hear your whispers on his lonely nights and think of you waiting upon the shores of love. hugss...enjoyed reading as always Sandra.. ~Victoria
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I love the way you write. Makes me clamor for more  More! More! More! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Trade winds blow gently o'er the sand carry a whisper 'cross the land Someday my love will come to me till then, I wait here by the sea. Hey Sandra, if ya get bored waiting by the sea, come on over and wait on the porch, awhile. I think I'm allowed to have company. Geez, I didn't ask, though. Maybe I should ask first. I'll get back to ya, ok?  |
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Dunphy Member
since 2002-03-14
Posts 82Massachusetts USA |
you know love is a trange tihng. you don't know what is comming to you. you wait and wait for the longest time and what notihng comes then again if the mate heres then he or she will answer. but love is pure truth and honer. love is nothing to abuse it wil backfire. i know i have been their and it is not cool. you will reach out and capture your love if not their is many stars to catch in the night quiet skies. you will find the one. i have faith in you. i have been hurt to many times. well i hope you keep'em posts commin because i like them especialy this one this is the one that really touched my heart. right now my heart is frozed into solid ice back into the dark deppression. i don't believe that i can return to the light. well i like ur poem write some more okay. have fun here. so long love dunphy kevin reid 18 m mass |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Wow I could smell the gardenia and feel the soft winds. lovely catalina. floria Floria |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Keep the torch lit and unlock the door... He will come... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
wow... this brought such vivid images to my mind...just a really beautifully written poem...very soft and gentle. thank you for sharing this with us! take care. amy "you can't stop |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
throw a stone in the water for me would you?? wonderful Sandra. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) And your love will come and sweep you off your feet on the beach, sweet friend, this is a soft yearning from your gorgeous heart! (kiss on cheek) May all your dreams come true, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
A siren's song if I ever heard one....he will certainly come, sandra...a man would be crazy not to... Once again....excellent presentation  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Yes Sandra! Someday your love will come to you. My wish for you is that it will be real soon. This is a beautiful poem. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Trade winds blow gently o'er the sand carry a whisper 'cross the land Someday my love will come to me till then, I wait here by the sea. Romantic, beautiful and well written, Sandra. I love the smell of gardenias. ~hugs~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Sandra, I really liked the solitude in this. The gardenia frangrance that fills the air makes for a perfect setting. Just have to keep watching for those ships passing in the night, ours will come in, any day now!! So I keep telling myself!! Very pretty poem! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sandra~ I've been waiting by the sea all my life....what a enchanting write this is....makes me look upward wishing for shooting stars to fall... Lauren~ Greeneyes~ |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
~Sandra, (it's me?) and I'm so glad I stopped here. This is perfect, could feel and see this through your words. I'll read it again and again. *Peace you. |
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