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DonFurr
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since 2001-01-01
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Monticello IN

0 posted 2002-03-25 02:28 AM



Walking as a gentleman walks
Talking as a gentleman talks
Holding honor as if it were
a friend in need of a hug

© Copyright 2002 Don Furr - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2002-03-25 02:54 AM


very nice, indeed
Death
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since 2001-05-26
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Twilight
2 posted 2002-03-25 07:46 AM


Why your last two lines are quite nice.
A sojourn from standard minimalism to
one speaking quatrain. This is most interesting.

I thank you for your insight.

"Sooner or later, Death makes a believer out of just about everyone."

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
3 posted 2002-03-25 01:52 PM


lovely poem...nice style of writing.

take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do

Temptress
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4 posted 2002-03-25 01:54 PM


very sweet...
this is done with a certain peaceful appeal.
enjoyed.

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

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