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Keys Thrown Away
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Keys Thrown Away |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Keys Thrown Away Into this quiet corner Its my solitary zone No one will see me A heartbreaks alone The state of oblivion Enables me to hide In wearing pretense Heartbreaks reside The sadness I abide Aches are caged in Emotions confined Heartbreaks within My heart tearful lair The despair is kept Keys thrown away Heartbreaks I wept Left in this situation I keep blaming me In tears of lonliness Heartbreaks reality Hope©2002 |
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Death Member
since 2001-05-26
Posts 112Twilight |
It may be said that we all make our own prisons. And of course, consigning one's heart to a dungeon- then to discard the keys, is what is often felt as needful for one's survival- both emotive and physical, (as if they could be seperated) yet the very knowledge of those keys, wantonly cast aside- offer the only escape possible. If one can find within the desire for light over night. These in the cerebral did your words inspire. Merci, for sharing your perspective. Perhaps words may be thy cathartic agent. "Sooner or later, Death makes a believer out of just about everyone." |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Hope, Is this an invitation to a pity party.  Sorry...we all have our bouts with a need to face the sad parts of our lives. But I seem to have this need to offer a smile regardless. Hope you don't mind. I certainly felt the pain in this piece and hope that is reflective of the past rather than the present. In either case I hope for a brighter day for you tomorrow. Peace.  Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Smiling back at you Larry yes one of those bouts we gain on the swings and lose on the roudabouts Hey I forgot to mention Writing for pity was never my intention Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
thanks Death it is because of someones silence I have been in kinda shock I hope to turn around soon With my key to writers block |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Hope, It is my smart*** style. Sorry...my wit is often sharper than my mind! Thanks for your patience and I do think this is a well expressed poem. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks Larry I enjoy a sharp witted mind replying to me twice you are too kind Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
been there, done it..it's no fun |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks pssing shadows , yes I'll await for brightness to return hey I wonder "do hearts ever learn " ?? Hope |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Hope, this is a very well expressed poem with an tremendous amount of emotion shown...i think all of us can relate to the words you have penned...i hope your tomorrows are brighter and better! take care. amy  "you can't stop |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I wish I wasn't feeling this right now..but I am. Enjoyed this. How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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