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Past Purple Fade...............
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Past Purple Fade............... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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The sun crept quietly leaving me with twilight sky scattered were the clouds like thoughts in a mind too full random in size, shape ~ intensity Holding on to nothing I let go, and just let the breeze stir my soul for a while realizing I didn’t have a need to feel, anything Lingering past purple fade crickets kept telling me the time as if I didn’t already know couldn’t already see by twinkle shine of stars displayed Without slightest of rush my feet could find no hurry nor move by pre-set clock instead stayed in cool of sand allowing my mind thoughtful hush And with the familiar comfort of love’s constant sustain his silent arm wrapped ‘round my shoulders tender, assuring fingertip caress wordlessly whispering that this love of ours would forever remain ~SEA~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Susan, What a wonderful way to spend time! Delightful images and thoughts. Thank you as always.  |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is so relaxing and beautiful, sue. Without slightest of rush my feet could find no hurry nor move by pre-set clock instead stayed in cool of sand allowing my mind thoughtful hush It looks like the very best way to live.  ~hugs~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Holding on to nothing I let go, and just let the breeze stir my soul for a while realizing I didn’t have a need to feel, anything This verse stands out from the rest because it is the only one without emotion. Yet, even feeling nothing...we feel. Love it, Susan! ...Cowboy |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Susan, I really liked I love the emotions and images you made visable Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Holding on to nothing I let go, and just let the breeze stir my soul for a while realizing I didn’t have a need to feel, anything It's easier that way isn't it? You write so nice, and I never fail to relate whole heartedly. Your poetry is always so soft SEA, and such a pleasure to read. |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Wow, Susan...such a relaxed but warm picture you paint here...wonderful dear...thanks for sharing... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And with the familiar comfort of love's constant sustain his silent arm wrapped 'round my shoulders tender, assuring fingertip caress wordlessly whispering that this love of ours would forever remain ================================= Seems like a while since I read such sweet contentment from you...makes me smile. love the rhyme scheme in this. A special moment captured in your words and images. Beautiful sharing Sea-girlie Of all the things in me I could never be, |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Susan, what a lovely portrayal of love and a sunset by the beach. (the most perfect time and place Sandra) |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
a gidt you present to those who read...to find a moments peace, a moments love... in your words. thanks |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Just absolutely BEAUTIFUL! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Susan, the images in this are so vivid. i felt every word you penned...this is truly beautiful sweetie, just a really wonderful write!!...take care. amy "you can't stop |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
May I keep this one? (((hugs))) me Stars will shine when I am gone |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
"wordlessly whispering that this love of ours would forever remain" A beautiful ending for a lovely poem, with great imagery. floria Floria |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue...one word...WoW! I do like this...your talent is certainly shining today... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes. . . I like the idea of this. . . the picture that it paints. . . very vivid. . . wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, you always paint the most lovely visions with your words and shadow them with the magic of loves promise! (kiss on cheek) may this beach vision forever fill your heart with delight, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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