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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-03-24 07:38 PM


(This is for my love Joanna, I love you my angel! )



Now off to see the Oscars! YAY!!!

Intimate
By: Noah Eaton
3/24/02

Every time I hear your heart beat
I can hear a melody singing to me
This is the first time I feel happy today
Before I didn't want to leave the comfort of my dreams space
My garden was flooded with Shepherds purses and thistles
And now you've shown me a love that makes me feel special

So hold my heart
In our heaven we'll escape
So hold my heart
Will you let me stay?

As I'm loving you
I can see the stars shining
When you're loving me
I can see a whole new world in your tears gleaming

I never thought I'd find those drops of jupiter
Find a shoulder to lean over, find a four-leaf clover
When you fell into my arms in my dreams
I lay there on my satin pillow, crying happily
I only pray that our hearts will beat together constant
Just the same when we fell in love in an instant

So hold my heart
In our heaven we'll escape
So hold my heart
Will you let me stay?

As I'm loving you
I can see the stars shining
When you're loving me
I can see a whole new world in your tears gleaming

So hold my heart...
So hold my heart...
So hold my heart...
Will you love me forever and a day...

At night I pray to God and happily uttering I cry
I feel like my life is beginning for the very first time
You are the sunflower that sways in my life
Your love is intimate to me, to me you're divine
You are the sunflower that sways in my life
Your love is intimate to me, to me you're divine

As I'm loving you
I can see the stars shining
When you're loving me
I can see a whole new world in your tears gleaming
As I'm loving you
I believe we're meant to be
When you're loving me
Is my love intimate to you
As you are to me...


[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-24-2002 07:54 PM).]

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Madame Chipmunk
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1 posted 2002-03-24 07:42 PM


Wow, Noah....9000 posts....
How ever did you do this so fast...

Congratulations on it and also on the beautiful and romantic poem for Joanna!
~hugs~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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2 posted 2002-03-24 07:43 PM


I blinked and now you're on 9,000 already!!!
You go boy!!! This is a very heartfelt poem you've dedicated to me! Thanks a bunch.
LOVE IT!

hugs,
RP

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3 posted 2002-03-24 07:57 PM


CONGRATULATIONS dear NOAH.. another lovely poem for your Joanna..hugs

              ~Victoria

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4 posted 2002-03-24 07:58 PM


Noah this is truly beautiful. and wow
9000 how in the world? well I wont even ask
I know how. lots of typing on the keys. You are a dear. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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5 posted 2002-03-24 08:33 PM


This reads with all the passion and all the questions that come up in a relationship... for as sure as we are...we are needing reassurance. You write from your heart, and it is a treat to know both. ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2002-03-24 08:35 PM



Congratulations on the 9000th post Noah...it is nice to see you do things with so much Passion!

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7 posted 2002-03-24 08:36 PM


congs on your 9000th post enjoy the read
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8 posted 2002-03-24 08:43 PM


9,000 already, Noah?  WOW!  Congratualtions, my friend.  I wish you and Joanna the very best!  

Michael

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste

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9 posted 2002-03-24 09:39 PM


noah,

this is wonderful beautifully written
work my friend...i hope you and joanna
are always this much in love and i wish
you both a lifetime of happiness...
congratuations on 9000! that is totally
awesome and quite admirable...
take care.
amy
:love ya:

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do

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10 posted 2002-03-24 09:52 PM


Noah, I'm beginning to think you like that gal!!

A wonderful milestone for you, Noah! Hearty congrats to you!!!

Tracey
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11 posted 2002-03-24 10:50 PM


Geez Noah, do you ever get any sleep, the way you keep racking up these numbers??/Lol. Congratulations on this new milestone. You’ve marked it very beautifully with this poem for Joanna. She must be thrilled with it.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2002-03-24 10:52 PM


May she hold your heart Noah...intimately...James
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13 posted 2002-03-24 11:42 PM


How do you create beautiful things so easily...

Happy 9000 good sir...  Happy 9000 more.

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14 posted 2002-03-25 03:01 AM


Goodness Noah, you are the ultimate romantic! Congrats on your 9000th! What a journey!
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15 posted 2002-03-25 09:43 AM


Hi Noah, congrats once again! You are so kind to write so many replies to us all, and so many sweet love poems, too.
I hope you and Joanna have a wonderful future together
Sandra

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16 posted 2002-03-25 09:56 PM


CONGRATULATIONS NOAH!
On your 9000 posts!
You are such an important part of Passions!
I'll bet Joanna loved this poem for her.
~Hugs and Cheers, Nancy~

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17 posted 2002-03-25 10:31 PM


Noah~
9,000
Already...WOW and what a beautiful poem for you to write, and place softly upon these pages for Joanna~ sigh, to be young and in love again.....


Lauren~


Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart



[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-25-2002 10:35 PM).]

Martie
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18 posted 2002-03-25 10:34 PM


Noah

A beautiful love poem..and all those numbers...wow!  Thank you for all your wonderful sweet replies..you're the best!

Charisma
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19 posted 2002-03-28 09:59 AM


*WOW* Noah..... 9000th posts.... congratulations and a wonderful lovely poem to celebrate your milestone.

(((hugs))))
Charisma

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