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Open Poetry #19

Lost & Found

Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

0 posted 2002-03-24 06:56 PM

Lost & Found

If I find again
The life of you
When blind to the world
Will I know you
By touch?
Will I have learned
that much?

Were I to sense again
Your words of time
Will my deafness peak,
Allowing me feel
Of your breath
’pon my cheek?

Let your finger
Trace my lines
To sip again
Lips so fine
That age made
Them soft for
You…

Tell me true…

Would you still
Feel me with
A heart of
Love?

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-03-24 07:01 PM

Beautiful...certainly he will..even then..
as it should be...for wine only gets better
with aging...

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

2 posted 2002-03-25 12:30 PM

Oh, yes......

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

3 posted 2002-03-25 12:36 PM

Let your finger
Trace my lines
To sip again
Lips so fine
That age made
Them soft for
You…

gorgeous writing!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Death
Member

since 2001-05-26

Posts 112
Twilight

4 posted 2002-03-25 02:20 AM

The insight offered herein is illuminating to the POV thine.

Thank you for the sharing of such.

"Sooner or later, Death makes a believer out of just about everyone."

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

5 posted 2002-03-25 01:37 PM

this is elegant writing at its
finest...you have such a way with
words...just beautifully expressed!

take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2002-03-25 04:09 PM

this is a tiny treasure. . . to hold in memory. . .

well done. . .

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