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SmartChick
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0 posted 2002-03-24 05:03 PM


1. Strong winds are blowing
   Trees are swaying back and forth
   With mighty strong winds

2. Surfacing new plants
   Popping up out of the ground
   Little red tulips

3. Some white hyacinths
   Already up and blooming
   On top of the ground

4. A bright shining sun
   Shining down on us today
   A beautiful day


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1 posted 2002-03-24 05:11 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, these are soooooo beautifully gorgeous, sweet friend, springs laughter and light fills your lovely words! (kiss on cheek) You are  atrue rose to us all, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-03-24 06:04 PM


yes.. spring is certainly in the air isnt it?

nicely done... enjoyed

               ~Victoria

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3 posted 2002-03-24 06:05 PM



Great title on some wonderful senryu!  Spring is all around us...if only winter would loosen its grip!

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (03-24-2002 06:06 PM).]

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4 posted 2002-03-24 07:31 PM


SmartChick~
Gal .... these are GREAT ! !

You took to Haiku like a robin to Spring~
LOVE 'em~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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5 posted 2002-03-24 08:00 PM


Nice
Nicer
Nicest
Nicestest....great job. floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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6 posted 2002-03-24 10:14 PM


excellent, smart lady! An wonderful combination to usher in Spring!
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