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amusemi
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A State of Disarray

0 posted 2002-03-24 12:37 PM


The Whale Poem

I am a whale
Who lives in the sea
I'm really big
But rare to see

I'm grey outside
Eat tons of fish
I don't like sharks
My tail goes swish

Dolphins are my friends
They're mammals, too
We swim all day
In the sea of blue

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1 posted 2002-03-24 12:41 PM




YAY!!! OH MY GOSH, I LOVE DOLPHINS, I LOVE DOLPHINS, THEY'RE SOOOOOOO CUTE! (giggles in delight) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you and your child make such a beautiful team together, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! (kiss on cheek) I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ShadowRider
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2 posted 2002-03-24 01:10 PM


Amusemi!  What an absolutely GREAAAAAAT way
of spending time with your Baby!
This had grins of joy written all over it!
I bet you two will have hours of soul-binding times to come
doing this
again
and again
and again *smile*
You guyz take care now!
Jeff

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3 posted 2002-03-24 01:57 PM


Soooooooo cute, my six year old grandson and I do this all the time. Such fun to do with the little ones. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

BluesSerenade
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4 posted 2002-03-24 02:10 PM


This was so refreshing.
I'd have to say you've taught your child well.  How sweet is!!

Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-03-24 08:02 PM


This is really cute, amusemi....
Its terrific to share your talent with your children.
My Dad was the one who sparked the poetry bug in me!
He wrote poetry and taught me so many words that I never would have learned in school.

GOOD FOR YOU!!!!!! ~hugs~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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6 posted 2002-03-24 08:30 PM


AmuseMi~
This is delightful ...
Tell that little poet 'REAL GOOD'~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Magnus
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7 posted 2002-03-24 08:36 PM


This is an inspiration to all of us...that
maybe our children will share their creative
nature with us as we do ours with them...

Nicely done!!

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8 posted 2002-03-24 08:53 PM


awww a dolphin duet with your baby!
I enjoyed it to the fullest!!!

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9 posted 2002-03-27 02:08 AM


Adorable and is there any better way than spending time with a child, than seeing their wee minds at work?  amusemi, I think we need a children's forum, what do you say?

~* Reality is an illusion ~ albeit a persistant one *~
Albert Einstein

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10 posted 2002-03-27 02:11 AM


very cute indeed! Keep writing!
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11 posted 2002-03-27 02:17 AM


Ohh this is sweet...
Smiles2uAmuseMi
*~coco~*

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