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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2002-03-24 10:04 AM



Clear beads to break the surface
Well up, to form the droplets sweet
In the knowing of the body, one true purpose
In the knowing of the mind, a rain elite

Unknown direction, in a secondary glance
Well up, to sway upon the ocean deep
In the knowing of the heart, a sacred rite to dance
In the knowing of the past, a giant leap

Clear shines the bauble of a tender time
Well up, to stand erect and face the sun
In the knowing intuition seek the steps to love a shine
In the knowing of the self, a life so richly done

Copyright Kkh 3/24/02

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-24 10:28 AM


ThisDiamond

Wise and beautiful words...wonderfully written...it flowed like a song.



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2 posted 2002-03-24 11:28 AM


This diamond, beautiful are your words.
"In the knowing intuition seek the steps to love a shine
In the knowing of the self, a life so richly done"

floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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3 posted 2002-03-24 11:35 AM


Icredible images, I could see the reflections of wisdom in this piece TD! Excellent form and flow...very beautiful!
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4 posted 2002-03-24 11:43 AM


ThisDiamond,
Well done a good read, enjoyed.

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5 posted 2002-03-24 11:45 AM


I love this!

((ThisDiamond))

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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6 posted 2002-03-24 12:26 PM




(smiles) This is such a wonderful poem packed with wisdom, sweet friend, I believe there is no feeling more comfortable and more awarding than loving oneself and feeling free understanding the past and approaching the future welcomingly! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2002-03-24 01:12 PM


Very effective, TD, and shows much intuition
on how things are
and how they should be!
Kudo's on this, amigo!
tSR

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8 posted 2002-03-24 01:15 PM


Stunning and radiant!  It should have Enya in the background...I love it!


ThisDiamond
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9 posted 2002-03-24 02:11 PM


No pain...no gain I guess.  Not so sure about the wisdom, but sure about the worth of good friends. Thank you.
ThisDiamond

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10 posted 2002-03-24 03:27 PM


This Diamond darling heart I love this utterly utterly, the flow of this is utterly divine and the rhythm is wonderful. I love this


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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11 posted 2002-03-24 07:17 PM


Nicely done....yes,  it flows like a song,
and that makes is priceless!

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12 posted 2002-03-29 10:05 AM


ThisDiamond~
This is a lovely morning for reading lovely poetry~
Thank you so much for sharing~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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