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Poetic Pining (20 or less...OR just 20)
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Poetic Pining (20 or less...OR just 20) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Magic’s hues colorfully kissed Enchanted views eyes missed softness of night’s blue in flowing lines such is you poetry pines |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, Nice one enjoyed. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Indeed it does.  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Sy....glad you liked... Martie....ditto.... I haven't commented to one of our poet's poetry....and I thought I would give them a a little gift...a 20 or less....since they got me started on this 20 or less thing!! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Wow Magnus, you did so well on this one. love it. floria Floria |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwww, this is such a breathtaking vision you've created with your words, sweet friend, your words always have me daydreaming of many wonderful things! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous brevity! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy this is truly utterly utterly wonderful. I love this utterly utterly fabulous piece. As I’ve mentioned before you do these less is more poems brilliantly, but didn’t we have a deal darling boy? weren’t you going to not write such brilliant pieces Hmmm? And you know this is another wonderful poem of yours. Now just don’t blame me when you get a bonk on the head and find yourself spirited off to somewhere in England. Mind you I’m sure the apple orchard will give it away, not to say the fact of the Oast House staring at you But in any case I’m innocent g’vnor I don’t know nuffink about nuffink said in the thickest cockney accent possible. Not that I can manage that but that’s just a side issue. It truly is a beautiful piece of writing and I love it  Love and warm stuff As always Slushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Barry, I liked this Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Simply stated and oh so enchanting. Wonderfully effective in so few words. Good good!!!  |
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