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Poet deVine
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0 posted 2002-03-23 10:44 PM



I stand upon the mountain
raise my voice for all to hear
I’m in love with a wonderful man
who doesn’t know I’m here

I sing a song of lonely repine
sadness mixed with hope
and watch to see if my beloved
dares climb this rocky slope

With a melody and chorus chant
in soprano voice I sing my plea
that if he hears this singer’s voice
he will climb to me.


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1 posted 2002-03-23 10:47 PM


With a melody and chorus chant
in soprano voice I sing my plea
that if he hears this singer’s voice
he will climb to me.

This is very beautiful, PDV....I hope he does hear your voice.  

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2 posted 2002-03-23 10:52 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too hope he hears your calling and falls into your arms and fills your heart with true love forever! (kiss on cheek) Your words are always a delight to read, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-03-23 11:40 PM


Yodel on, deVine one.....scream it and he will hear
Poet deVine
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Thank you for your kind comments.

But Balladeer, I am not a screamer!!

I'm quiet and rather shy............

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5 posted 2002-03-23 11:44 PM


This is beautiful, Sharon. I hope he does hear you.
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6 posted 2002-03-24 12:08 PM


I love this poet, I could just picture you standing up there on that mountain top singing soprano. Now whats the song? LOL..beautiful. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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