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Ablution'Sonnet... Spring Repost
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Ablution'Sonnet... Spring Repost |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA 
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 As vernal coverlet seals winter's snow, From nimbus urn, Aquarian heart so sleight Decants time's cleansing waterfalls below In pure ablution of past season's blight. Remanding discord and consouling strife, This host befalls renewed vivacity Once sallow hearts now carpet verdant life, With resurrected faith that we may see Effluent love. Spring nascency's begun, Anointing solar rays' descent on rills Of rainbows hues reflecting golden sun In bounteous eyes of springing daffodils. Enlightened by a sapient sun above, Inspired by ablutions' flowing love. A Simile is as easy as pie, but a Metaphor is a piece of cake ~*~ Nancy Ness |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Darn it...I will NEVER do it THIS WELL!!!!! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And I agree with Sunshine....envy, envy, green with envy....tis me.... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A beautiful sonnet of Spring! This is perfection, Nan! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautfiul, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! I love writing sonnets and now you've inspired me to try and write one for spring! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your words are always sunshine and spring to us all! You have such a beautfiul heart, sweet Nan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, A excellent write.  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Thanks folks... Sunshine - No one shines as you do...  Magnus - Thanks... No need for green - St. Patty's day was last week..  Denise - Thankee - Now you repost one..  Noah - Thanks - You're an angel..  Sy - Big Smooches... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
As vernal coverlet seals winter's snow, From nimbus urn, Aquarian heart so sleight Decants time's cleansing waterfalls below In pure ablution of past season's blight. This is absolutely gorgeous, Nan...  ~hugs~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Nan, this is so good. And, that is a beautiful picture. I'll never get that good. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I rest my case that you are the queen of sonnets!  I remember this one well and I am still in awe of your talent.Have you ever thought of publishing your work? Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Thank you so much, my friends - This is a very special piece to me... Madame C - Thankee - Hugs to you as well.. Smart One - You surely will.. Just keep on writing...  Honeybee - Thankya - Um.. Thought about it, yes - Does that count??..  Vandana - Glad you stopped by - Thanks..  A Simile is as easy as pie, but a Metaphor is a piece of cake ~*~ Nancy Ness |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Okay, Nan, you talked me into it!  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, I think you wanted me to post one of my old sonnets! I got ya! Okay, one for Spring and a sonnet! |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
This is lovely.....it's not quite spring where I live (too cold!), but I'm looking forward to it.  sky |
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