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From her kiss
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From her kiss |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA 
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From her kiss "Let him kiss me with the kisses of his mouth - for your love is more delightful than wine." NIV Song of Solomon 1:2 May I kiss you, she sweetly asked As I was taken by surprise And little did I realize As I drank from her crystal flask. That I would never be the same Her kiss would be deadly potions To capture my soul in oceans In currents and hot fiery flames. For in her lips and searching tongue I found sweet secret confection Developed to her perfection That melted me and made me young. And now there's only her hot fumes For all of me, my ev'ry pore Wants all of her forever more As heated ecstasy consumes. From her kiss. Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida March 23, 2002 Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Powerful words....sometimes people have a way of overtaking you. Good write.  sky |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I know just how you feel for I long for loves first kiss so much and I want to share it with my sweet Gwenevere! (big hugggsssssss) May the fires of loves kiss forever light your heart with joy, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I think kissing is so sensual, especially when that person makes you feel sparks! I like the rhyming pattern you've used! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Really nice poem Newell soft and sensual. floriaFloria |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thanks for your kindness, sky! ((sky)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you sweet Noah for your loving thoughts. ((Noah)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Joanna. I agree. I love kissing. ((Joanna)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, floria, for your sweet words. ((floria)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Silver Streak...A poem of fire, and smouldering passions. Truly a powerful piece!!!! ***Ivy Rose |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Ivy. It is written in answer to a poet friend of mine that invited me to kiss her. ((Ivy)) Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Now I will be hummming..."Just One Kiss"...the rest of the day  Beautifully romantic Newell! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Newell darling boy this is truly wonderful. YOU always conjure such outstanding images and this is no exception. You’ve painted this whole picture perfectly, not a brushstroke out of place. I would say this is crafted with care and such precision the picture built in layers until the final stroke completes the picture leaving the reader with a feeling of total communication. Utterly fabulous writing. I can see the whole beautiful picture I love this utterly utterly   Love and warm stuff As always Slushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Dulcinea, I'd love to hear you hum. Sounds wonderful. Mmmmmmmm. Just one more kiss. xo. ((Dulcinea)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Marsha, darling girl. O my, sweet lady, your words of honey cover my soul. I am deeply honored and humbled by your words of praise. I love you, Mushy. xo ((Marsha)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
from a kiss a utopian horizon is born from just a kiss nations have joined hands from the lack of a kiss souls collide in sorrow if darkness is your backshoulder offer a kiss and spread the word of love great work Newell. ~sigh~ Jeff |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I have to agree with the others cos I'm speehless I'm wise enough now not to let cool get to me. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Now that's a hot one! This is so much the male libido...in its full beauty and flavor. How well done, I even understand it. Best Regards Always, ThisDiamond |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
jeff, your words of wisdom are awesome! ((jeff)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Ah to be speechless, the best time to kiss! xo ((Moon Dust)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, ThisDiamond, for your kind words. ((ThisDiamond)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, James. ((James)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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