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Skyfire
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0 posted 2002-03-23 03:17 AM



It hurts so much
  I just want to hold you...  
Just to feel your arms around me...

No matter what you say
  I still feel like I'm going to push you away
With the depth of my love for you...

My feelings scare myself
  "Rhonda doesn't love" was my motto
Then Rhonda met you...

I fell head over heels for you
  I didn't know how to tell you
But I did...

You're so incredible...
  I miss you so so much...
I want to give you all of me...

Every single part of me is yours
  My heart, body, and mind
I belong to you now, do what you will

Loving you has changed me
  I'm a better person because of you
More able to love you

It's been a bad weekend...
  And it's just started
There's still a day and a half left till I can talk to you next...

I worship the ground you walk on
  No other man catches my eye
I'm just going to give up to these feelings...

I'm holding so much love inside for you
  I just have a hard time feeling it
If my love scares you, tell me-- I'll back off

This is my letter to you
  Nothing held back
I miss you

I love you
  With all I am
I love you

Hopelessly in love

© Copyright 2002 Rhonda Adolph - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-23 07:12 AM


*huggles*

Huggles :)

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2 posted 2002-03-23 10:07 AM


This is so sweet. Hang in there, the weekend is half over already.

sky

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3 posted 2002-03-23 10:11 AM


enjoyed
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4 posted 2002-03-23 12:27 PM




(big huggggsssssss) Awwwwwwww, I know just how you feel, I always feel the same way about Joanna; I love her so much and I am always anxious to see her on IM again and talk to her again and again and tell her how much I love her! (sigh) Hang in there, sweet friend, I am sure he feels the same way about you and misses you with all his heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rhonda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-03-23 01:35 PM


wow you definitely have love on the brain
As long as you are happy that makes me happy!

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6 posted 2002-03-23 04:38 PM


sky,

this is so beautiful and touching! how could any man
turn away from lovely words such as these. hang in there
sweetie...i hope things get better for you and you don't have
to be apart too long...i know just how hard that is!

take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do

Dulcinea
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7 posted 2002-03-23 04:52 PM


Scary! Was like looking into a mirror...wow...do I know that hopelessly in love feeling...still do! Well done!
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8 posted 2002-03-23 08:05 PM


"My body is merely the canvas of my soul."
         ~ The Night Owl

Madame Chipmunk
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9 posted 2002-03-24 12:16 PM


So very real and so very touching, Rhonda
Best of luck with your new love.
  ~hugs~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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10 posted 2002-03-24 12:22 PM


Skyfire,

   I ran in here when I saw this title! I was worried   Luckily, there is nothing to be worried about. This is so heartfelt and so honest, I enjoyed.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Larry C
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11 posted 2002-03-24 02:21 AM


Rhonda,
This definitely qualifies as being "head over heals" in love! What a good man wouldn't give for that... (is it Monday yet?)

Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy

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12 posted 2002-03-24 04:07 AM


May love take you where you want to go...James
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