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Streen
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0 posted 2002-03-22 05:27 PM



He bungles a bark and gurgles his growl,
this timid black poodle of mine.
She tuckers the floor with a whack of her tail,
this haughty fat feline of mine.
He paces the pad and hoots like an owl,
this big 'n small canine of mine.
She displays her paunch with the tact of a whale,
this naughty cat noodle of mine.
Across the floor he gruffles his bowwow,
and humbly territory begs.
She ruffles her neck and her mouth quickly frowns
so cold as to stiffen up dregs
He emits a whine and covers his brow
so weakened as yolk of some eggs
By gazing her glare from her throne on the ground,
he runs quickly tail between legs.

© Copyright 2002 Derek Benz - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-22 05:46 PM



CATastrophic pooching at its best...I enjoyed this!

jwesley
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2 posted 2002-03-22 06:05 PM


Giggling here...very, very cute!!

jwesley

Pell
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3 posted 2002-03-22 06:22 PM


hahaha, very cute indeed!
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4 posted 2002-03-22 09:05 PM




(giggles in delight) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooo cute, sweet friend, your wonderful words always make me laugh and delight my day! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Derek, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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