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ParisGrl
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0 posted 2002-03-22 04:07 PM



This poem is for Lana who has helpeal my heart and taught me to love again.

You came into my life just out of the blueWith one look I fell for you
Maybe I'm jumping to fast will you be there to catch my fall?I don't know where I would be without you in my life at all.
But there are circumstances that stand in the way of you and I
Maybe I should just say goodbye, I don't know how much longer I can wait, my need for you is just to great
I don't know why you suddenly picked me but I want you to know that I can't wait until you and I become- we


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Pilgrimage
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1 posted 2002-03-22 04:26 PM


The moment when you and I become we is always special. Enjoyed your poem.

Nan

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2 posted 2002-03-22 06:25 PM


awww, that's so sweet!

Zu is my hero

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3 posted 2002-03-22 08:40 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I hope it all works out and Lana will always love you as you love him! (kiss on cheek) This is a beautiful declaration of hopeful love, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Laura, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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