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Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2002-03-22 03:42 PM

I saw the sea upon the
oceans nightmare melody
behind the walls of whisper
beyound the fog we live
I looked upon the sea
for the fortunes lost
the time I cannot breathe.

I saw the sea upon the
last light of the suns cool rays
bringing up the fallen angels
that what their right to scream
out loud to a forgotten world
that measures all of us to death
and slowly, we find ourselves
in anger lost as we forget.

I saw the sea, as it
toppled the last remaining city
to late for silent prayers
the screams are all left to bare
in second thoughts we find
that the heart is want to die
unless you stare into the sea
to find the peace you wanted to be.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2002-03-22 03:55 PM

I saw the sea, as it
toppled the last remaining city
to late for silent prayers
the screams are all left to bare
in second thoughts we find
that the heart is want to die
unless you stare into the sea
to find the peace you wanted to be.
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a hauntingly beautiful write Michael...written with your trademark mix of longing and imagery.
good to see your name here poet of the wind.

Of all the things in me I could never be,
of the true I kept hidden from view,
the best parts of my heart ...
were the ones touched by you.

jm

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-03-22 07:39 PM

(sigh) This is a very powerfully emotional poem, sweet friend, may you find your reflection in the ocean of life and seek the inner-peace your heart desires ever so much! (big hugggssssss) This is a powerfully expressed thouight, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-03-22 07:48 PM

It's not often I miss the beaches I once walked, but you've got me missing 'em now...

mirror man
Senior Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

4 posted 2002-03-22 08:01 PM

I like this, the imagery and thought. Very good.

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