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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2002-03-22 11:14 AM

Yesterday

gone

like
minutes past
when thoughts
of pleading unrequited's
case seemed not only
desirable

but feasible

even, possible

until
reality
ever present
ever vigilant
cruelly checks
any future dreams
of being with you

My present

empty

a gag gift
you unwittingly left
behind in your haste
to be gone

like
yesterday

~Tier
3/02

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-03-22 11:17 AM

this touches me so deep....
I know this
excellent writing

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

2 posted 2002-03-22 11:21 AM

Yep, gotta ditto SEA on this one...

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2002-03-22 11:22 AM

Ouch... nicely written RT... the queen of romance and loss strikes again with words to tear at our hearts..

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-03-22 11:28 AM

Tier...this choked it right out...well done!

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2002-03-22 11:36 AM

Tiersdin

The expression of your pain hurts to read. Well done

PoetriPrincess
Member

since 2001-11-17

Posts 55
CA / U.S.A

6 posted 2002-03-22 01:43 PM

I am feelin' this. Very touching

A Musician must make his Music,
An Artist must Paint,
A Poet must Write,
if he/she is to ultimately
be at Peace with himself.
~ Abraham Maslo

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2002-03-22 03:37 PM

yes, my friend. . . too many yesterdays. . . and not enough presents. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

8 posted 2002-03-22 03:39 PM

Tiers truly heartfelt write, I love it. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-03-22 07:23 PM

(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Tiersdin, this is so very sad, my heart goes out to everyone who is victimied by this feeling and I pray that time can ease the hurt and we can all tuen from yesterday and find infinite focus in the present for hope to endure all our hearts every tomorrow! (kiss on cheek) This is beautfiully heartaching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiersdin, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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