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Illusionary Sanctity
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Illusionary Sanctity |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
It wasn’t easy to forget The way at sunset you hair caught the last light And in silhouette your face was hidden So that I could not see what your eyes were saying While you stretched with arms over head As if yawning out an old day with its exhausted stale Then breathed in the stars and nights pillowed hills It wasn’t easy to forget Because I looked for those times To paint on minds gallery images not Harsh like the noon stripped eyes That offered no shade, cast no shadows Leaving no place to hide but inside The shadows of my own. The way at sunset your hair caught the last light I was fooled into thinking you had a halo |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
The way you look at people makes some of us wish we could fall under your glance |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Thanks for the comment Deca... we all see... sometimes we just don't notice. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron Yes, Deca is right..I felt that too. You see through and into, but this one is with the soft light of love, and the edge of disappointment. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Thanks Martie.. you are too kind.. we all see into and through, I think we just choose to ignore what we know, because it is easier. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
It wasn’t easy to forget Because I looked for those times Reminds me of times when I have lay in the darkness and willed myself to always remember the moment, knowing it wouldn't last any other way. Love this, Ron. And the halo...priceless. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Thanks Duncan... it is the times we will ourselves to remember or the times that will us to remember... either way. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
This is absolutely ..... wonderfull your too good... LOL ... and don't play humble : ) Connie |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  WOW!!! I love this one, sweet friend, I think this wonderfully depicts the experience in which we sometimes fail to notice the true beauty that lies within and how it just may flicker so abruptly our eyes can't register it and how if we can feel for someone we must be able to captivate these momens and feel the light of love rather than just the words! (smiles) This is absolutely wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautfiul heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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