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Decaflame
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0 posted 2002-03-22 10:10 AM



Sounds so Deer

Resigned design
of images unwind
in refined confine
of iambic beat
replete

repeat the story
one more time

tell us again
of traveled roads
and unload
your stories at our feet

sweet
recall
combined
enthrall

keep us close to you


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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2002-03-22 10:22 AM


yes please
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2 posted 2002-03-22 10:33 AM


And we all do, don't we? lovely, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Accordionmaid
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3 posted 2002-03-22 10:38 AM


This is beautiful.  We see some deer here, now and then.

"I think I go home."
(Garbo)

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4 posted 2002-03-22 12:07 PM


Decca darling girl yes that is ‘Deer to a T. you have penned an absolutely beauty here. As always an excellent piece of writing wonderful writing absolutely winderful


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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5 posted 2002-03-22 06:51 PM




(smiles) Yep, here there is indeed a deer crossing, and we see plenty of deer magic around her always! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your wonderful words always brighten up my day, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-03-22 08:35 PM


Aw, thank you, flaming one for such nice words

I take the road less traveled
And then, more than not, I fear
My mind becomes unraveled
Destination is unclear..

But I'll just keep on going
Though the journey may be long.
It's so much nicer knowing
I have you to come along...

It's my pleasure and honor to write my little ramblings for such a wonderful group of fellow poets. Thank you...

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