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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2002-03-21 11:44 PM



I like
every smooth, perfect
feature of his young face
the strength of his
long tan lanky body
all muscular & pleasing
I giggle everytime
his naked form lay
sleeping in my bed
& even when I pinch
myself to see if I'm
dreaming?
my eye catches the
glint on the gold ring
I'd placed on his finger
six whole years ago,
isn't life grand?

~R.T.
3/02

[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (03-22-2002 12:33 AM).]

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2002-03-21 11:46 PM


sounds like it was grand indeed...

nice to see you my friend

Tiersdin
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2 posted 2002-03-21 11:49 PM


Hello Captain, nice to see you as well!

*smiles*

~tier

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3 posted 2002-03-22 12:01 PM




(sigh) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you and your love forever shimmer like the golden glow on your ring together in true loves happiness! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautfiul heart, sweet Tiersdin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Tiersdin
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4 posted 2002-03-22 12:10 PM


Thanks Noah, you're always so kind...

*hugs*
~Tier

[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (03-22-2002 12:33 AM).]

Duncan
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5 posted 2002-03-22 12:20 PM


Six years!  Damn, I've never done anything for six whole years.  Sounds like you've loved every minute of it.  Good one, Tier!
Tiersdin
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6 posted 2002-03-22 12:32 PM


Thank you, Duncan...

*smiles*

~Tier

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7 posted 2002-03-22 11:50 PM


I sit here sharing your smile, I hope you don't mind?  This was lovely.

You gain strength, courage, and confidence by every experience in which you really stop to look fear in the face. You must do the thing which you thin

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8 posted 2002-03-23 12:34 PM


Your love is evident in here. Many more happy years to you!

sky

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9 posted 2002-03-23 12:49 PM


This is great! I love the sensuality of the moment.
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10 posted 2002-03-23 10:22 AM


enjoy the read
rebekah33
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11 posted 2002-03-23 04:32 PM


It is grand that it has been six years and you're so much in love! (and he still looks so good )
-R.

"So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain

Dulcinea
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12 posted 2002-03-23 04:39 PM


Oh, indeed it is Tiersdin! Indeed it is...thoroughly enjoyed this one!
Ivy Rose
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13 posted 2002-03-23 06:54 PM


Tiersdin...Sounds like a match made in Heaven.  Great descriptions, imagery.

***Ivy Rose

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14 posted 2002-03-23 09:26 PM



I like that YOU like!  Enjoyed this!

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15 posted 2002-03-23 10:03 PM


Reading these words...I would say that you
are smiling from ear to ear...and your world
is full of life!!

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