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Open Poetry #19

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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-03-21 08:10 PM

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you say
your heart
is in
the right
place
I just
wonder
where is
the rest
of you

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2002-03-21 08:13 PM

That's one powerful punch in few words...well expressed!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

2 posted 2002-03-21 08:15 PM

Very very clever. one slick, good job. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-03-21 08:15 PM

WOW!!! Oh my gosh, this is a short but emotionally packed poem, sweet friend, I hope now your heart is held by one whose heart and everything in him is in the right places and faithful to you! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!