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Silver Streak
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0 posted 2002-03-21 05:53 PM


Yes darling, you are free

"Then you will know the truth, and the truth will set you free." NIV John 8:32

I did not get a message
I did not get a mail
You knew I'd know though somewhat slow
Your raptured ship had sailed.

I always said you would be free
No bonds for thee, no jealousy
And though my heart now breaks apart
Thanks for your time with me.

I wish you well and pray you're fine
I thank you for your wine, your shine
And yes, your free, no jealousy
True love is always free.

Some sorrow is the price I pay
For loving you in my pure way
With all my heart, though now we part
Until eternity.

Yes, darling you are free.

Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher
Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida
March 21, 2002


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strbbux
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1 posted 2002-03-21 05:58 PM


This is very bittersweet Newell, sad and yet much love here, Very nice, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Silver Streak
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2 posted 2002-03-21 05:59 PM


Thank you, floria.

((floria))
-newell

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3 posted 2002-03-21 09:10 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Newell, this is so sad yet sooooo beautiful, I too know this kind of feeling so well and I think this is indeed a generous feeling that two can share in heartaching times when love ends! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Silver Streak
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4 posted 2002-03-21 09:57 PM


Thank you sweet Noah for your loving thoughts.

((Noah))
-newell

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5 posted 2002-03-21 10:07 PM


What a beautiful poem! That is just gorgeous!

Zu is my hero

Silver Streak
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6 posted 2002-03-21 10:12 PM


Thank you Skyfire.

((Skyfire))
-newell

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7 posted 2002-03-22 01:02 AM


Newell darling boy it’s the only way to be is free, this is superb writing as usual, your spirit flies in this darling boy. Utterly utterly divine, freedom form jealousy, freedom for bitterness freedom to float in and about. Wonderful writing. YOU really are a fabulous writer and this is a fabulous piece.

Excellent darling boy utterly excellent  


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Silver Streak
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8 posted 2002-03-22 01:41 AM


Marsha, darling girl. Thank you for your lovely words. They are sweet honey to my soul. And as always, I love you, Mushy. xo

((Marsha))
-newell  

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Saunni
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9 posted 2002-03-22 03:21 AM


Oh, so very, very beautiful! It's sad, but leaves a warm feeling for what once was. Amazing write. I am glad I have read your words the last few times that I have, it sure has given me a smile. Be well!

Sauni @~~~>~~

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The River Flows Not Past,
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10 posted 2002-03-22 06:05 AM


been there done that...I know it hurts. I suppose we should be grateful for the time we have.
Silver Streak
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11 posted 2002-03-22 09:07 AM


Thank you Sauni for your kind words.

((Sauni))
-newell

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Silver Streak
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12 posted 2002-03-22 09:09 AM


Thank you passing shadows for your thoughts. Yes, I believe that we should be happy for all joy and pleasure we find. Memories are our most beautiful treasures. Trying to continue them against the will of others is selfish and futile. It robs us of new memories.  

((passing shadows))

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Spirit Of Twilight
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13 posted 2002-04-19 08:13 AM


Big Bro~Newell,
This is a wonderful poem...sad yet sweet. I love it as I do to all of your poems.
Lil Sis~Neha

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