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Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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northern mountains, Idaho

0 posted 2002-03-21 03:34 PM



Up through the ravine roared the north wind,
as if in a war against the first night of spring.

We heard the tin roof spread its wings
above our bed, in the dark of the mountain,
suddenly alive, and panting to fly
away with the wildly turbulent clouds.
We felt alarming thumps, and shrieks howled as
the metal yanked and twisted in an agony to
rip nails from their roots like
pulling teeth without novacaine.

It continued all night and morning.
At eleven, pale sun fingers crept out and
touched the frozen expanse of roof ice,
hanging down off the edges, long and thick,
with its cruel sharp claws of dripping icicles
pointing in crookedly toward the windows.

We watched as the sheets began to break off.
They fell for hours against walls shivering sharply,
piece by piece abruptly crunching against glass;
a monster attempting to consume the house
bite by manic bite.

And the clamoring wind chimes
thrashed like frenzied lovers; at last
breaking their grasp
and falling to rest
in the soft white snow.
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(C) 2002 Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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© Copyright 2002 Rosemary J. Gwaltney - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-03-21 05:53 PM


Rosemary,
A delight to read. Enjoyed

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2 posted 2002-03-21 07:00 PM


Enjoyed this read,  though I felt a chill
come over me...and the wind certainly was
howling....Nice write!!!  Excellent imagery!

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3 posted 2002-03-21 09:07 PM




(smiles) Wow, this is a wonderfully beautiful poem with a small eerie feel to the whistles of the wind, sweet friend, I too would understand how uneasy it woul dfeel to try and sleep hearing the ceiling make noises like that! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rosemary, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-03-21 11:19 PM


Rosemary~
My, my !  Such imagery that brought this windstorm to peak~
Brilliantly written, my friend~

'We heard the tin roof spread its wings
above our bed, in the dark of the mountain,
suddenly alive, and panting to fly
away with the wildly turbulent clouds.'


And the clamoring wind chimes
thrashed like frenzied lovers; at last
breaking their grasp
and falling to rest
in the soft white snow.'


Loved both of these verses~
It's sooooo very, very good to read you again~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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strbbux
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5 posted 2002-03-22 03:35 PM


Rosemary this is awesome, simply beautiful words, and oh I have been in that kind of wind. You made me feel it here. Lovely work and I dont know how it got past me. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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