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strbbux
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0 posted 2002-03-21 09:44 AM



Moonbeams Of Blue

I stepped outside this summer night so fair,
There was a difference in this dark of night.
Of everything around I was aware,
It had a cast of blue that shimmered bright.

For all the trees their limbs were of azure,
And all the grass below the colors cast,
Were of the oddest shade, a tint so sure,
And as I looked about I held it fast.

The moon itself it seemed vanilla cream,
And yet the midnight ink of sky was deep.
I prayed that this was real and not a dream,
A scene so haunting that I could not sleep.

Perhaps this night The Lord was not asleep.
And took artistic liberties to heart.
He dipped His brush in paint piled in a heap.
Created with this mystic shade His art.

And then the earth he painted with a hue,
That shimmered in the glowing of the moon.
For every thing the beams lit turned to blue,
And night for me would surely end too soon.

Floria

[This message has been edited by strbbux (03-21-2002 09:45 AM).]

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Krissy
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1 posted 2002-03-21 09:54 AM


Floria Hi there this is such a wonderful piece of writing, this is so pretty and visual I like this one such a lot. You are an excellent writer and this is quite wonderful. This is a keeper for certain.

You don’t mind going into my library do you?


Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

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at every pore with instant fires
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strbbux
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2 posted 2002-03-21 10:09 AM


Krissy it would be an honor to be in your library, and I thank you so much. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Martie
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3 posted 2002-03-21 10:29 AM


Floria

The imagery in this is wonderful..a flow of words that took me there and at the same time made me wish that I had seen it.

Victoria
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4 posted 2002-03-21 11:07 AM


This was my favorite hon..hugs..loved it..beautiful images..

              Victoria~


"If music be the food of love, play on."  (William Shakespeare)



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5 posted 2002-03-21 11:15 AM


Floria~
You 'know' I can't resist the moon
and this is just so filled with imagery~
LOVE IT~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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vandana
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6 posted 2002-03-21 11:43 AM


enjoyed
Pilgrimage
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7 posted 2002-03-21 12:54 PM


I can see it in my mind-what a vision!

Nan

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8 posted 2002-03-21 12:58 PM


Floria, your paintbrush is so full of vivid imagery. Thank you for sharing your special moonbeams.
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9 posted 2002-03-21 01:10 PM


Floria,
A lovely, lovely write. You used a full palette.

strbbux
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10 posted 2002-03-21 06:04 PM


Martie thank you so much for your kind words. floria


Victoria thank you for your kind reply. floria

Marge, thank you, I always like hearing from you, floria

Vandana, thank you. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

strbbux
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11 posted 2002-03-21 06:06 PM


Pilgrimage,thanks for your kind remarks. floria

Midnite, anytime, I love sharing. floria

Seymour, thank you much, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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12 posted 2002-03-21 08:11 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, oh my gosh, I just love seeing everything when the moonlight shines at night, it always makes me sigh for that to me is the ost romantic vision of all! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Floria, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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13 posted 2002-03-21 08:12 PM


Hello Floria

This was wonderful.  Such a beautiful painted with your very talented brush.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

strbbux
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14 posted 2002-03-21 08:14 PM


thank you Noah for always encouraging me, floria

sue thank you always for your sweet words of encouragement. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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15 posted 2002-03-21 08:26 PM


O floria. This is very beutiful. Your poetry just gets better and better. Thanks for sharing.

((floria))
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strbbux
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16 posted 2002-03-21 08:48 PM


Thanks Newell you encourage me a lot. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

JamesMichael
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17 posted 2002-03-21 08:51 PM


Very nice floria...James
Madame Chipmunk
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18 posted 2002-03-22 11:34 PM


And then the earth he painted with a hue,
That shimmered in the glowing of the moon.
For every thing the beams lit turned to blue,
And night for me would surely end too soon.

A beautifully written, delightful poem, Floria....I hope you got some sleep too!
~hugs~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

strbbux
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19 posted 2002-03-23 09:00 AM


James thank you so much. floria

Lyra, thanks much, well on a night like that who can sleep? I remember it so vividly, even the smell of that night. I am so glad it came back into my memory, thanks for always commenting and "bumping" me. LOL. floria  (((hugs back )))

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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