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Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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northern mountains, Idaho

0 posted 2002-03-21 01:46 AM


Frigid wind
skips white-whipped
over impossibly rich key-lime
waves on Lake Pend Orielle’s north curve.

Winter holds a frozen moat around the land
a thousand feet out from the shore, in a
shining gray steel embrace. Curling
round the moat’s edges, on the
waterline, a ragged, crusted
ridge of ice, each lap
of waves freezing
it fresh
white

Here
hungry wild
geese stand sharply
peering, perched to plunge in
for a fish between the bobbing shards
of ice set free by a temporary thaw, and
between the hundreds of protruding feet
and tail feathers of their busily
searching fellow mates.

They always seem
to know where
the fishing
is fine.

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(C)2002 Rosemary J. Gwaltney

[This message has been edited by Rosemary J. Gwaltney (03-21-2002 11:59 PM).]

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Larry C
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1 posted 2002-03-21 01:58 AM


Rosemary,
Nice poem and presentation. Hey I was born not too far from there!

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2 posted 2002-03-21 02:03 AM


Now aren't you clever what a beautiful presentation visually and poetically.  I kept this one, as also the images in my mind were pretty darn wonderful!  I love how the water does that making it so clean and white with each new spash!  

The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives.
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3 posted 2002-03-21 07:11 AM



Ah Rosemary...I'm a bit late with the Welcome Back Home....but I saw in these little fishing bobbles a great memory, and thank you for that!  It is good to see you and lucky again...where have the two of you been keeping yourselves?

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4 posted 2002-03-21 10:02 AM


beautiful
Martie
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5 posted 2002-03-21 10:26 AM



Rosemary

Your words capture better than a photograph.  Beautiful thawing on this first day of spring.

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6 posted 2002-03-21 10:06 PM




(smiles) YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhhh...this is such a gorgeous vision of nature, sweet friend, I want to see this place someday, it must be such a gorgeous vision to see all those geese on the waters! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rosemary, thank you for sahring!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
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7 posted 2002-03-21 10:17 PM


Vivid images, I could just see all those feathers flying..diving for a meal...very nicely done! *S*
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