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What More?
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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What More? What more could I ask for than what you give to me? A love that sometimes is bathed in utmost serenity But at other times the passion flows with such fire That I’m lifted up on a wave of incredibly sweet desire There’s never a wrong time for me to be with you In the morning in the night or all the day through Whenever I touch your hand I can feel this love flow And every day I feel my love for you grow and grow What else could I do but fall deeply in love with you? You fill me with such sweetness that flows all through When I hear your voice I’m drenched in pure delight Immersed in heavenly sensations pierced by love’s light No other soul could touch that secret place within me That center of my soul’s being that spark of infinity You know all that I am and yet you still seek more With you in my heart I’m flying so high I simply soar What choice did my heart have I had to love you I had to cede to your power to feel this love so true There’s no question that you don’t truly adore only me That is something I know with love’s utter certainty I feel you in my heart you’re in each and every beat And whenever you’re near I feel such a rush of heat I belong to you my heart is yours to have and hold This I know my darling our love will never run cold Marsha To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Marsha dear, this is so beautiful and it sounds like a perfect relationship and I am so happy for you. There is nothing in the world to compare to true love. floria Floria |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha,   What else could I do or say. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Marsha~ How lovely a view of love, you display your emotions nicely and with much heart...   HUGSSS Lauren~ Greeneyes~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
A favorite now of yours... "What choice did my heart have I had to love you"...know this feeling *s Hugss M |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of love always grace these pages, I too hope this is true love and it will forever bring you great rapture! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sis, this is so beautiful and full of so much emotion. your love comes shining through the page...really loved this. you make me smile. thank you for your wonderful friendship and for sharing your wonderful talent of a amazing poetress. take care. love you! amy "you can't stop |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
here, the face of true love beams irresistible, no choice exists but to love and to live a Love Jeff |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Perfect Marsha...who could ask for anything more...James |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Lovely, Marsha! God bless! ((Marsha)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Marsha, there is a certain someone, and well, I never could say it like I so wanted to, but you sure did. I think you read my heart with this one. Beautiful, beautiful write here! Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
You have found some new words to had to your dictionary of rhyme, and they reason in quite well with the gift you have...well done! |
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butterflykiss989 Member
since 2002-02-19
Posts 52 |
This was a beautiful write... good job |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
As always, well done. ThisDiamond |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh my, Marsha, I read this one and I had to run to Elizabeth Barrett Browning and reread her sonnet: First time he kissed me he but only kiss'd The fingers of this hand with which I write It gave me that same feeling. That same 'love just keeps getting better and better' feeling. I'm so happy for you. Nan |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Ummmmmm...you penned it perfectly ~~sigh~~ I know those feelings so very well! Love this Marsha! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhGirlieGirl~ You done got it BAD and that's GOOD~  My-my ... you just set the morning off just right~ Love ya' poetess~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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