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0 posted 2002-03-20 03:40 PM



Sit on the back of a white turtledove
Released from the hands of God in the sky
Was the one of all the one I love
The one who makes me laugh on and makes me cry
Leaving my life in the hands of the lord
I walk blind along the path of my life
Round my neck I feel strangled by a cord
O love may be hurtful and may cause strife
But in the end my love will conquer all
Every small thing that he has done and said
I forgive and forget but still I can’t call
It does not matter if he’s banished
Sit on the back of a white turtledove
I hope it carries and cares for my love.

Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both.

© Copyright 2002 Clare Griffiths - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-20 06:08 PM


hi I really like this poem, it makes me think and I love when a poem does that to me. thanx for sharing
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2 posted 2002-03-20 07:15 PM


Every small thing that he has done and said
I forgive and forget but still I can’t call


*s  I have been through  these emotions Claire...

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3 posted 2002-03-20 07:51 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you forever soar on the back of the dove and croon with true happiness in love forever! (kiss on cheek) we all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Clare, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-03-20 07:54 PM


Quite strong thoughts here Clare...enjoyed the read tonight.  Thank you for this one.
Hugs, Nancy.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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