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HopeS
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0 posted 2002-03-21 12:31 PM


Appetites Met daily

My heart was left open
With feelings exposed
It is until further notice
A sign will read closed

Believed you were true
I allowed you to enter
Being all my own fault
I am soft in the centre

Easily bent and folded
The soft heart my trait
You having sensed this
Words were your bait

Throwing me your line
You began the reeling
I believed in promises
Keeping true to feeling

Hooked into my heart
From out the cybersea
Appetites are met daily
It is there you fed me

Hope ©2002

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Tracey
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1 posted 2002-03-21 12:39 PM


A heart wrenching tale Hope. But, stay true to your name and keep the hope that there are others in the world who are true and loving.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-03-21 10:26 PM




(sigh) Oh Hope, this is sooooooo heartwrenchingly beautiful, sweet friend, there will always be those we meet that do not sympathize with how we feel in the long run, but there will always be friends that will feed our needs and quench our thirst with promises always! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-21-2002 10:27 PM).]

Cameo Dreams
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3 posted 2002-03-23 01:27 AM


The cyberworld is scary. Stay safe. I enjoyed your poem and hope things are better for you soon.
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