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Purple Twilight

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Sunshine
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Purple Twilight

In purple haze
of twilight time
he found her
in seasoned rhyme

he saw her form
he caressed her face
he took her to
his strong embrace

he loved her

In daybreak’s gleam
he searched his room
such was his dream
now filled with gloom

he loved her

on the street
in broad daylight
he searched first left
then to the right

he scanned all eyes
in those he found
searching for
the ones of brown

he loved her

his mind numb
soul wracked with pain
he went to his room
to await again

the purple haze
of twilight time
to find her
in seasoned rhyme

he saw her form
he caressed her face
he took her in
his strong embrace

and he loved her


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©Karilea Rilling Jungel
2 September 2000


© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 03-19-2002 10:10 PM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, somehow this poem made me feel lovesick reading this to envision waking up at sunrise and resting with the girl of my dreams close to my heart, loving her compassionately! (kiss on cheek) This is a gorgeous vision of majestic love, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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the purple haze
of twilight time
to find her
in seasoned rhyme

he saw her form
he caressed her face
he took her in
his strong embrace

and he loved her
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Amazing!  Did I ever tell you I love the way you write?!  Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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All I can say about this one, Karilea...is

WOW!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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This was all encompassing in it's beauty and enhanced by the tenderness of your words.

No better way to spend the twilight time.
(that I can think of)




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So beautiful, the fleeting glimpse of love portrayed in hues of sunset.  Thank you.
ThisDiamond
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WOW! this is stronger'n an acre of garlic!!!!! Yanno?....I used to envy the ability of water to touch the female body all over at the same time...this kinda makes me think of that...of course, I haven't had my medication yet today and I only get out of this straight jacket for short periods of a time each day.....this poem reminds me of that too.....but my problem I think was purple haze from the late 60's.....LOL...seriously, this is very very good.....
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Karilea

What hues you take to color love..this embrace is wonderful!
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Thank hue for such a wonderful piece
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wonderful painting....wonderful thought... as always I look forward to reading your words...

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hendrix tune
heavy rhythm that melds her skin
to her caution
til it seeps willing

to love dance places

enjoyed it lady
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he scanned all eyes
in those he found
searching for
the ones of brown

he loved her

his mind numb
soul wracked with pain
he went to his room
to await again

the purple haze
of twilight time
to find her
in seasoned rhyme

he saw her form
he caressed her face
he took her in
his strong embrace

and he loved her
=========================

he had green eyes  

(another keeper)

Of all the things in me I could never be,
of the true I kept hidden from view,
the best parts of my heart ...
were the ones touched by you.

jm

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hendrix tune
heavy rhythm that melds her skin
to her caution
til it seeps willing

to love dance places

enjoyed it lady
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Sunshine this is simply lovely, I loved reading it and then got to the last line. Oh my, how nice, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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And I love this!  This is very nice work, Karilea.  Your writing only gets better and better!  

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste

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This is beautiful.  Love the romance in your soul, my friend.  The way you express it!

Shenachie
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WOW!!!
 
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