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John Yaws
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 860
Texas

0 posted 2002-03-19 09:20 PM

Your number never answers-
I merely hear your voice...
With the standard message,
And the standard choice...
“I’m sorry I’m not home right now-
But I’ll return your call”.
I sadly leave my message-
Then I let the hand set fall.

I type and send the e-mails-
But never get replies...
I know that it is over...
So why am I surprised?
So let me say, “I love you-
Now I’ll leave you alone”.
I guess that we both knew our love-
Was going, going, gone.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-19 09:35 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Such sadness fills your words, sweet friend, I pray with all my heart that soo she will call you back and talk to you for hours and love will come jumping into your arms once more forever! (sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet John, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

2 posted 2002-03-22 04:07 PM

I loved the brevity of the poem-it reinforced the message, and gave it power. Very well done.

Nan

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2002-03-22 04:37 PM

Very well done, my man...short and full of impact!

jwesley

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2002-03-23 11:03 PM

Very sad when that happens. You've expressed the pain well.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2002-03-27 12:19 PM

Excellent writing...James

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

6 posted 2002-03-27 12:34 PM

Gunslinger,
Dang...I hate that. Well done though.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2002-03-27 01:58 AM

welp, being on the other side, I let my voicemail get my calls. I can say I've let alot of them go. I know this hurts, but sooner or later you'll find someone who'll speak with you. Hopes and prayers, PS

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