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Moonlight Romeo
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The heart of you

0 posted 2002-03-19 01:32 PM


What would I see if I looked through your eyes?
Someone who smiles at knowing she is loved.
The world in hues of moonlight and sunlight.
The depth of eyes that can see through the soul.

Would I know the secrets that your heart holds?
Spelled out in words flowing across the page;
Words that you write, my love, only for me?
Would I know your heart then, Dear One?

I would see your world as it moves with you,
And watch your feet walk down the path of life;
Knowing that your life will soon be with mine,
And knowing that our eyes will meet as well.

Then, I will look through your eyes back at mine.
And our love, Dear, will be easy to see.


What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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1 posted 2002-03-19 03:10 PM


"Then, I will look through your eyes back at mine.
And our love, Dear, will be easy to see."




(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I hope all you will ever see is all the love and happiness you desire and deserve from your Juliet's heart, this is sooooooo breathtaking! We all love you so much, sweet friend, you always write such sheer romance! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Romeo, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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