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Open Poetry #19

Space Drum (septet)

Accordionmaid
Member

since 2001-10-28

Posts 153
MA/USA

0 posted 2002-03-19 10:14 AM

Drum has space

Space within the drum
Space between ev'ry drumbeat
Between drum and space does my heart beat
Heart becomes drumbeat becomes
Space within the drum

Space has drum
~~~ ~ ~~~

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

1 posted 2002-03-19 10:26 AM

Accordionmaid this is beautiful and very skillfully penned. Thank you for sharing.

((Accordionmaid)
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-03-19 04:48 PM

WOW!!! Ooohhhhhhh...I love the transition of your emotions in this poem, I love the serpentine rhythm of this and the emotions you present! (kiss on cheek) May your heart forever beat to the drum of love and happiness, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Drum has spaceSpace within the drumSpace between ev'ry drumbeatBetween drum and space does my heart beatHeart becomes drumbeat becomesSpace within the drumSpace has drum~~~~~ ~~~~~ ~~~~~

Drum has space

Space within the drum
Space between ev'ry drumbeat
Between drum and space does my heart beat
Heart becomes drumbeat becomes
Space within the drum

Space has drum
~~~ ~ ~~~