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You eyes/ Sublime
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You eyes/ Sublime |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I bury myself in these words if only for a moment I escape from seeing nothing in your eyes And then I go again I cannot picture the pain so I take my pen and write meaningless words that sometimes rhyme: Sublime I need to hold you so bad No need to read between the lines I can read it in your eyes So I swallow and drink for us Taking another stroll into your mind Sinking deep into you Denying what lies in your eyes I will never be satisfy with your responce I want more from this I can feel my need sufficating each time you hold back Please don't do that I'm here and you're there we can conquer together we can live in forever Come join me and finally Look me in the eyes I will see beyond that I will capture your gaze I won't question what I find |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Keep patiently coaxing. I hope she responds the way you need her to one day...beautifully heart felt desires these walker...nicely done! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Tried to pick out my favorite parts of this, ended up with the whole poem. Good one, walker. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you forever hold your love close to your heart and always look deep into his eyes and find all your heart desires and be captivated by his charm! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Walker! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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