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The Kiss |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Repost: The Kiss I look up at a feather sky. And I am near to swoon. Where rorsahak clouds nestle and fly. Under the light of noon. She lies my side with rose bud lips Under the light of noon. While touching her with finger tips And I am near to swoon. My heart is pain torment and bliss And I am near to swoon. To bend me down and steal a kiss Under the light of noon But do I dare these lips in haste Under the light of noon. And do I dare inhale the taste For I am near to swoon. Will she pageant this tete-a-tete, Or has the moment past in wait? Under the light of noon For I am near to swoon. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Well now ... if she doesn't swoon .. there is something wrong, for these words surely had me swoonin'! A lovely write Sy!  Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (03-19-2002 07:52 AM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
She lies my side with rose bud lips Under the light of noon. While touching her with finger tips And I am near to swoon. My heart is pain torment and bliss And I am near to swoon. To bend me down and steal a kiss Under the light of noon But do I dare these lips in haste Under the light of noon. And do I dare inhale the taste For I am near to swoon. ======================================== *SWOON*  *SWOON*  *SWOON*  (ohhowilovewhenyouwritelikethis) *winkiewinkie*  Of all the things in me I could never be, of the true I kept hidden from view, the best parts of my heart ... were the ones touched by you. jm [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (03-19-2002 08:35 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Will she pageant this tete-a-tete, Or has the moment past in wait? Under the light of noon For I am near to swoon."  (sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, yep, I agree, if she doesn't swoon over this one, something definitely is wrong, for you have so much to give and have such a romantic heart! (smiles) May you and your love forever share a lifetime of happiness in kiss, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This is a de"light"ful piece of peace, Sy...swoon along, and sing more song, and I shall keep the noir away... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Mmmm, to swoon early in the morning...lovely! Enjoyed this Sy, with my morning coffee. Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy I love the swoon in this its soooooooooo full of simmer. Mmmmm absolutely perfect poetry darling boy. Sometimes your pen picks me up in thought and takes me on the back of sigh to the isle of Oh MY! This is one of those dreamy times, utterly utterly wonderful darling boy, tu est formidable    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Kit, JM, Winkiewinkie Randy stinky. Thank you Noah. Laddy in White, Thank you dear, Enchantress, Thank you for the lovely. Marsha, |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
O My! This is good! ((Seymour)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
WOW...is all i can say before i swoon....  |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Very lovely poem. I enjoyed it tremendously. Cheryl |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Swoon.....Swoon......just lovely..... On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Must I wait til noon to swoon how about 8 AM or afternoon? and without a moon.  [This message has been edited by Martie (03-19-2002 11:40 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Newell. Amigo, Thank you for the WOW. Thank you Cheryl. Gentle Spirit, Thank you for the lovely. Martie, |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Seymour...EXQUISITE!!!! A kiss of magic in this poem. ***Ivy Rose |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhSeymour~ Most times I love your poetry ... other times I LOVE YOUR POETRY~ 'I look up at a feather sky. And I am near to swoon. Where rorsahak clouds nestle and fly. Under the light of noon. She lies my side with rose bud lips Under the light of noon. While touching her with finger tips And I am near to swoon.' And this - yes this I am near to feeling that *kiss* Writ with pen of poet quill-swoon Oh tell me where to find that moon~ *Hugs* n' *kisses* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
But do I dare these lips in haste Under the light of noon. Some moments must be taken and held. This was one of them. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ivy Rose, Thank you for the exquisite. Marge, Most times I love your poetry ... other times I LOVE YOUR POETRY~ What could be nicer than that. Hugs and kisses back. Duncan, Thank you my friend. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I can't wait forever when it comes to a kiss...I can't even wait a moment...James |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
there is a kind, romantic lustre to your words, Seymour. we could all take a page from your poetry and learn much and enjoy living even more! jeff |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
James, I used to be like that. LOL ShadowRider, A beautiful comment, thanks |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
BUMP!.... Superb Sy, nicely done! |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
What a poem, what a poem, what a poem! I LOVE IT.  As a romantic, this touches my heart. It's so sweet, romantic, gentle and full of passion. It superbly written, has great rhyme, and kept my attention the entire way. "But do I dare these lips in haste Under the light of noon. And do I dare inhale the taste For I am near to swoon." How wodnerful. Maybe one day I'll show this to my wife.~ Titus "My body is merely the canvas of my soul." |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
very romantic poem you have penned! Your rhyming pattern was so perfect too! Enjoyed sir |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
She lies my side with rose bud lips Under the light of noon. While touching her with finger tips And I am near to swoon. So very romantic, Sy...and beautifully written too! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour, *sigh* I love this style, and the words, so romantic....keeping this one for sure |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sy, You you swoon a nice toon. I had that very experience the first time I kissed my wife. Middle of the night beside a lake...full moon...fishermen with lanterns...and lips. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 My aren't we in a romantic mood this evening? This was very "swoony" and I loved every word of this one. ~* Reality is an illusion ~ albeit a persistant one *~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Sea, Larry, Hey your not so bad yourself. Sharon, I get that way every once in a while. LOL |
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