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Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
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0 posted 2002-03-18 03:49 PM



the answers we left behind
the doorway to our song
as laughter ends in tears
for the lost in all of us
can you hear the Sun rise
coming through the midnight rain?
can you hear the angels singing
through the clouds of pain?

the truth is finnally found
to the lock upon my soul
it whispers carefully
or you may destroy it all
can you see the sails
of the ships beyound the shore?
as they clamber out to sea
where I must now go

angels and the sonnets
that transferd me to this
have open up my heart again
so I can trip once more
this futile try at majesty
can keep its opulance
so I can find myself with eyes
that face the wind again.

© Copyright 2002 Michael G - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-18 04:19 PM



You need not be all alone when you come home to fine comraderie and poetry...welcome home, long lost Michael G....

Dulcinea
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2 posted 2002-03-18 06:08 PM


~~sigh~~ truly sad and melancholy...well written!
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3 posted 2002-03-18 07:11 PM




(big huggsssssssss) Oh Michael, this is so very sad, sweet friend, I pray with all my heart soon you will find all your heart is looking for and pierce through the wilderness of your fears and find true solace! (sigh) we all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

monique
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since 2000-02-03
Posts 369
Louisiana
4 posted 2002-03-19 01:05 PM



your poem is rich with sadness
i pray for it to leak in the lake at the foot of the mountain to big to climb

monique

[This message has been edited by monique (03-19-2002 01:08 PM).]

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