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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Bedfellow My thoughts are like a weeping willow Grabbing softly at my pillow. Gracing like a snow white dove In the brilliant light of love And glistening dew glows like stars Lighting up a sky of tar Sweeping blaze into my eyes Blinding me with hypnotize. The willows have become a part Tentacles deep in my heart Visiting me a nightly seem Deep within a nightly dream I cannot separate the two The willow and my thoughts of you Both are like a dream to me Like a brew that turns to tea Punchinello and bedfellow Weeping willow and my pillow. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh my goodness Sy ... I cannot pick a favorite line! The flow in this was absolutely delightful ... it was as if it sang it's own melody within my mind. Just wonderful!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I just love weeping willows - and the picture you paint with them is grand... Kewl beans, Sy..  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kit, My only answer could be a big  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan I can't let this go without another big [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (03-18-2002 08:01 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Sy, this one is so beautiful and lyrical...it just picked me up and twirled me around in a morning dance! Wonderful! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Nicely penned, my friend. ((Seymour)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Seymour beautiful dreamy glow Thanks for letting me share the thoughts from your pillow Hope |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, What a lovely reply.  Newell, Thank you sir. Hopes, My pleasure. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I have a special friend who will get a great deal from this, Sy...mind if I share?  Dinna think so.... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And glistening dew glows like stars Lighting up a sky of tar Sweeping blaze into my eyes Blinding me with hypnotize. ================================ I cannot separate the two The willow and my thoughts of you Both are like a dream to me Like a brew that turns to tea Punchinello and bedfellow Weeping willow and my pillow. ================================= thy muse returns !!!   only you could come up with the image "sky of tar" and make me see the stars. very very cool Stinky. ~~~~~~~~ Meet me at midnight under the willow tree, beneath the stars, we'll have tea till three. I'll wish a wish that your dreams no longer weep ... from now on you will sleep in the star's safe keep.  *winkiewinkie*  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Awwwwww, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of love always make me smile! (sigh) May you forever rest close to your love heart at night and cry happy tears that reflect the starlight of dreams, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Oh! I love this one Sy..from beginning to end..an enjoyable read... ~Victoria~
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Of course, JM, We tete-a-tete a world of wait And drink our tea far out at sea. The Eden gaden of our fate Is only sate to part my state The other part plays moody coy And makes a face that looks like poi. Poi, a hawaian paste food that tastes terrible. LOL Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky Love ya Thank you Noah. Victoria, Thank you sweet. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Excellent write, I hope your pillow can stand all the abuse Sandra |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy this is utterly utterly utterly amazing. You’ve picked up the melody within and spun it into a moonbeam dream. A starry confection of delight. YOU do know I love this don’t you? I thought you’d probably pick up the subtle and delicate nuances of my rapture. I can never do subtle anyway I’m stunned into silence this is soooooooo brilliant, this really IS writingpas excellence  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandra, Never go anywhere without it. LOL Marsha, |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
You have such a magical eye, Sey. Cor |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
I wonder if weeping willows really do dream...and if they could, would they use pillows to dream on? Lovely poem Seymour! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Seymour, I know you didn't write this for me, but is it okay if I pretend? I kept this one, as the words speak to me in a very, very special way. I would like to thank you from the bottom of my heart for writing this one, and Sunshine for sending it to me, as I missed it somehow, and THIS I needed to read today. If you were here I would hug you, so tell your wife I plan on giving you one for this the day I meet you The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne, Thank you dear. Dulcinea, Thank you for the lovely. Sharon, I'll tell her. |
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