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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-03-17 10:03 PM



Moon In Sliver

~*Marge Tindal*~

~Silent is
the moon in sliver
Promising love, to deliver
Just a shine of heart-thoughts
too tiny to discern ..... each new
heart in aching, sings a special song
Chorus of remember in delicate recall
Light of moon in sliver - brings heart
of purest light ..... shining, shining
thusly into the night, she beckons
in a petticoat of a million stars
dance
'cross the Milky Way
in silent glow of moon
Sliver me~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2002-03-17 10:12 PM


Bravo!
A glittering performance! ThisDiamond

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2 posted 2002-03-17 10:13 PM


Margie girl OH MY FUR AND WHISKERS!! This is the most gorgeous and sparkling delight I have ever seen, this must have taken ages. But it’s worth every single second. Truly you KNOW how I love glitter, and this is superb darling heart simply stunningly beautiful.

What can I say you’ve shared such a pure and incandescent glow with me, I love it love it love it. Definitely a keeper, and Ooooohhhhhh and ahhhhhhhh just as I would on November 5 when fireworks light the sky, this shall light my night. Exceptional darling heart utterly exceptional


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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3 posted 2002-03-17 10:18 PM


Enjoyed reading this Marge...James
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4 posted 2002-03-17 10:19 PM


ThisDiamond~
Thank you so very much~

MarshaLove~
LOL @ 'must have taken ages.'
Tee-Hee ... 8 minutes ... start to finishing glow~

WELL ... couldn't let your little heart outshine me ..
Now COULD I ?
Love you gal~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Martie
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5 posted 2002-03-18 10:34 AM


Marge--You know how I love a slivered moon!!  Hugs!
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6 posted 2002-03-18 10:44 AM


Marge,
You always make me feel like I want to you.

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7 posted 2002-03-18 11:04 AM



Marge, and the moon was slivered just so last 'eve, for I saw this and went outside just to look to see...and there were the stars, and the moon, all waiting for Sun....

it was so delightful, I forgot to come back in and tell you what a wonderful job you did!

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8 posted 2002-03-18 11:08 AM


"Silver Me". How perfect an ending for a sparkling poem.
Sandra

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9 posted 2002-03-18 11:34 AM


Marge, very lovely presentation! Enjoyed this gem. Cheryl
Marge Tindal
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Martie~
Tee-Hee .... I kinda figured that out~

Seymour~
Well darlin' ... bring it on~

Karilea~
Yep ... too my pup out ...
saw that sliver and just HAD TO WRITE IT~

CatalinaMoon~
Thank you gal ... *hugs*-to-go~

HisPoet/Cheryl~
I'm really pleased to know you enjoyed it~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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11 posted 2002-03-18 04:15 PM


Marge, I love the way you shine and light up my life.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

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12 posted 2002-03-20 08:01 AM


Dee~
Oh, what a lovely thing to say~
I thank YOU for letting me know you enjoyed it~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Krissy
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13 posted 2002-03-20 01:16 PM


Auntie Margie girl my favourite aunt, oh yes mum was right this is a real beauty. You KNOW how she is about glitter and I’m the same about the night sky, there’s nothing I love more than the moon and stars.

This really is spectacular, one day I’ll try to do something as creative as this, but not yet, and it won't be this special but then it couldn't be


Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy


And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Ivy Rose
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14 posted 2002-03-20 01:35 PM


Marge...Beautiful beyond words. Radiant with the silvered light of the Slivered Moon.

***Ivy Rose

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15 posted 2002-03-21 10:48 PM



Marge-
You've gotta know I love this.
There is still no one who writes the moon like you do.
Love it!
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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16 posted 2002-03-21 10:52 PM


Oh Marge, this is a beautiful sparkling poem. I love it.
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17 posted 2002-03-21 11:02 PM


Krissy~
LOL@ your Mom in her glitter~
I'll be waiting for that 'creativity' gal~
Meanwhile ... your poetry is aglow~

IvyRose~
Awwww, thank you so much gal~

VICKY ! !
My little buddy ... *HUGS*
You know I love ya'gal~
Come on down !

SmartChick~
I'm so glad you got to see it my friend~
Thank you so much~

Love n' *hugs* to all~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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