navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #19 » Corduroy on New Years (rather cheesy)
Open Poetry #19
Post A Reply Post New Topic Corduroy on New Years (rather cheesy) Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
tearpearl
Junior Member
since 2001-12-14
Posts 17


0 posted 2002-03-17 08:47 PM



I thought, I would
A nervous wreck
Yet thoughts, are thoughts
And not reality

Cigarette smoke
Permeated
Through orange fuzz
Your sofa, where we sat

Brown corduroy
Deep, dark, brown eyes
And in your arms
The toy, you entertained

The clock strike twelve
All cheers and smiles
A hug from you
The kiss from your mother

It seemed as though
The night was done
Chance forgotten
The answer was revealed

This fire I held
Began to die
Like air, no hope
No more, the fire will burn

It’s one o’clock
It’s time to go
Alone with you
And your corduroy shirt

You pulled me close
And held me tight
Lips to mine
The kiss of a lifetime

Come one hour later
My heart had stopped
I almost cried
I think you meant it

When I am queen I will insist with perfect scars upon my wrists
that everything you once held dear is taken away from you

© Copyright 2002 tearpearl - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
1 posted 2002-03-17 09:01 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I don't think this is cheesy at all, I think this is such a beautiful memory to always have just as I am so happy you shared this from your heart, for memories are worth of timeless and priceless value! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may you forever hold this kiss of a lifetime dearly as I hope your heart will forever be kissed by true love! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Oksana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #19 » Corduroy on New Years (rather cheesy)

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary