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Krissy
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

0 posted 2002-03-17 08:19 PM

Perception Of Deception

There’s truth and there’s truth
Understood a falsehood
Conception birth of honest mirth
Obviously wrong
Not truths heart song
Why the softened sigh
The silken net of
Deception
Perception of lies
Causes honest why’s
Then heart’s shatter
In splatter of pains
Gain
No truth or trust
Just to unjust

There are lies and then there are lies
Except this precept
Shows that those
Who suppose
Assume a pose
To fit this concept
Of betrayals shame is no game
Nor do they give to live
With hope of true
Except those few
Whose trust is bent
By what isn’t meant

There are a few who spin the facts
To the efficient max
Show unconcern
That hearts do learn
The pain of this betrayers kiss
Whose touch is certain
To deceive in weave
Of truths or lies
Held in softened sighs

Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

1 posted 2002-03-17 08:22 PM

Krissy, this is very profound. I am in awe of your wisdom.

((Krissy))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-03-17 08:24 PM

That's my girl! You go and play with words, interally rhyming, and you'll get a huge hug from me for it! I think your mother shared her talents Very Well!!!

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

3 posted 2002-03-17 08:45 PM

Krissy: this is wonderfull.... I mean it.
Write On....
Connie

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2002-03-17 08:47 PM

KrissyDear~

There’s truth and there’s truth'

Oh my ! Nailed this one !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2002-03-17 08:52 PM

There are a few who spin the facts
To the efficient max
Show unconcern
That hearts do learn
The pain of this betrayers kiss
Whose touch is certain
To deceive in weave
Of truths or lies
Held in softened sighs
Lots of wisdom indeed Krissy...you did a great job hon ..hugss

~Victoria~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-03-17 08:52 PM

(smiles) WOW!!! Ooohhhhhhh...this is soooooo beautifully expressed, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always speak with such truth and gist! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krissy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ShadowRider
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since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

7 posted 2002-03-17 08:59 PM

Ohhhhh Krissy!   I DO love your creativity!  What a major breath of freshAireyou are.  ~excuse me while i breathe deep~      ffffffttttttttttttt
You have rejuvinated some old ideas soooo well.  The contrasting first two
stanza's - the inner broken rhymes worked extremely well!  Veryyyyy Cool!
no....check that....

WAAAAAY COOOL!
All my best to youse Guyzzz!
Jeff

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

8 posted 2002-03-18 02:35 AM

Krissy, you little philosopher, you! A short time ago you were just trying to make two words rhyme and now you are coming up with elaborate rhyme schemes conveying deep thought with a myriad of emotions! Very impressive!!

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

9 posted 2002-03-18 06:32 AM

Excellent Krissy! This had a wonderful flow, and I enjoyed the rhyme scheme throughout. Very much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Dulcinea
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since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

10 posted 2002-03-18 06:31 PM

An incredible write Krissy! The use of the internal rhyme mixed with twisted truths and half-truths to get to the real truth...blew me away! This is certainly a keeper!

Poet deVine

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11 posted 2002-03-18 07:08 PM

Excellent rhyme and the message is very timely!!

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

12 posted 2002-03-18 07:40 PM

krissy-

since your first coming to passions,
i've been in awe of your work as you
know...you write beautiful free verse
but my dear friend this internal rhyme
of a poem is sensational! i love every
line, it's true poetry in motion!!

take care.
love ya,
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

13 posted 2002-03-18 11:23 PM

Krissy~

I too am in awe of this....wow this is grand!

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Krissy
Senior Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

14 posted 2002-03-26 11:48 AM

Newell hi there thank you very much, I appreciate the fact you replied to me. Thank you for your time and encouragement

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Krissy
Senior Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

15 posted 2002-03-26 11:50 AM

Auntie Kari thank you so much, I can’t tell you how much that remark means to me. I think we’ve agreed that I do the complicated

free verse and mum can do the easy stuff. you know I’m joking don’t you Thank you I really do thank you

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

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